Gem GTS Story-Redux

[growspaz]

When I posted the first draft of Gem GTS I really didnt take the proper time for proofreading and transitions. I have redone many of the growth scenes adding more detial to the clothes rippage. I have also added some new scenes and left the story ready for another chapter as soon as I get the chance to write more...stay tuned

<p>The day started just like any other for Amy, the young graphic designer. Amy is very pretty and sexy at 5?8? tall; she is also blessed with gorgeous 36D tits. As she gets ready for work she dresses in her gray pants suit with button down dress shirt and gray fabric belt. She slips on her black heels and then heads out the door for work. On the way to work she stops at the starbucks and on the way in she is stopped by a sickly looking homeless woman. ?Will you take my red gemstone necklace off my hands; I just need the cash?$20 ok?? Amy caves in and decides to buy the very well kept shiny necklace. There is some sort of picture etched in the back of the stone, it?s hard to make out but it looks like a woman with her hands in the air. Now late for work Amy decides against the coffee and heads directly to the office, on the way to the car she secures the necklace around her neck. As she drives she notices how gorgeous and bright the stone is. After arriving at her desk she gets out a mirror to look at the new necklace again, she notices that very faintly written on the stone under the woman figure is the word ?Passion.? She is startled by her boss Alan who dives right into yelling at her for being late. This time he really gets in her face, Amy is almost afraid of Alan right now; her breathing gets heavier and heavier. Right as she begins to feel frightened Alan leaves and Amy can finally let her emotions go; she begins to cry at her desk. She looks up from her tears into the mirror and notices the gem is almost glowing bright red?.in fact Amy notices it is glowing.<p/>

She begins to feel warm all over, she begins to sweat more then usual in the office. She notices that her pant legs are higher then they were earlier, and her belt is getting tight around her waist. She feels her breasts perk up and begin to fit less comfortably in her bra. Her bra straps begin to creak and stretch Amy hears this and gets more panicked. Her shirt buttons begin to pull tight across her chest revealing her midriff and slowly expanding waist confined for now by her belt and pants clasp. She decides quickly to head for the corporate bathroom, it is individual and lockable. Amy stands up and feels extremely dizzy she heads straight for the bathroom; almost tripping her shoes begin to break apart as her feet get larger. She drops a few inches as her heels break just as she clears her office door. As she yanked her tight shoes off in the hallway Amy finally has an idea what?s going on?SHE IS GROWING. She gets into the ladies corporate lounge area and is stopped by her friend from the office down the hall, Jessica. Jessica stops Amy because mostly she notices that she looks sick, bloated. ?Hey babe what?s up? Want to hit the bathroom? Are you sick?? Amy can?t even think of a response, she just wants to leave so bad and get into the bathroom to figure things out. Jessica pulls her into the larger corporate bathroom. Jessica?s eyes get wide as Amy?s pants begin to ride up even more and her whole outfit now loudly contests this growing form with more stretching warping sliding sounds, and her jacket buttons pop off exposing her button down shirt, which is now beginning to get tight. Amy doesn?t know what to do, she looks down to see her pant legs begin to rip up the sides exposing her long legs inch by inch. The back off the pants begin to lose the fight as her expanding butt pushes into it harder and harder. Jessica can?t help but laugh to herself about her shy friend who never even wears a bikini losing her clothes somehow. ?This isn?t funny! I?m?I?m?I?m really worried what if I grow any bigger in these clothes I?ll be naked!? Just as she finishes her little rant with a huff she hears her belt groan and clank at the buckle along with her shirt seams and buttons getting quite tight around her expanding bust and shoulders. The top button of Amy?s shirt snapped quietly and disappeared in her swelling cleavage. Her next buttons the ones located at the fullest part of breast burst off Pop Pop right into Jessica?s face, ?I?m getting too big what?s happening to me my shirt wont close anymore my bra is almost showing here come on(she blushes)?help me Jessica!? Her belt finally ripped the leather and snapped the buckle resulting in it getting popped open exposing her straining pants clasp and zipper. Jessica didn?t know where to look, Amy was about to pop more buttons on her shirt and her ass and hips where getting close to ripping her pants. They both look down quickly to see her pants clasp spring open and her zipper get forced down showing the top of her panties. ?Oooo nice green panties Amy haha? Jessica laughed, Amy shouted back, ?Jessica please this is very?very?scary?I?I?I need some bigger clothes or something to cover up I am scared this isn?t stopping?please help me!? Just as her last cry for help came un- answered Amy?s next two shirt buttons popped off, this time exposing her lime green push up bra. Amy didn?t usually wear them but it was her last clean one. The cups of the bra began to groan and stretch with her much bigger chest. As she leaned down to cover her bra and exposed panties in the front Jessica heard the seams down the ass of the pants finally give way, Popping open from top to bottom exposing more round ass and green panties and ripping every seam in front and back. This, along with the sides her pants burst off and she screams in embarrassment. ?Chill Out babe this could be fun,? says the more outgoing Jessica. As the growth comes to a stop with her left in only a tight bra, and very tight panties Amy breathes a sigh of relief as she continues to cover her undergarments from Jessica. The first thing they both noticed is that the necklace stayed with her during all the growth?Amy denied anything strange or the glowing she witnessed earlier, but Jessica had her curiosities about the gem. Meantime though she had to be a good friend to the embarrassed and almost naked Amy. She told her to lock the door a wait while she tried to find some very large clothes at the department store down the block. Amy was ok with this plan and eagerly waited for her new outfit so she could at least get out of the building and home without looking too suspicious. To keep everything looking normal Jessica began looking in the big and tall women?s dressclothes. As Jessica quickly shopped Amy was having her own problems.

The corporate level employees kept jiggling the handle of their bathroom and banging on the door, this made Amy VERY nervous. She hid hoping the janitor wouldn?t come jimmy the door, as her heart raced she felt the glow of the gem again, immediately her breasts swelled larger causing her left bra strap to burst off followed by the waist stitches of her panties. Jessica came running down the hall just as the panties shredded more and more?covering less and less of Amy?s body. As Amy let Jessica back in, barely opening the door her right shoulder bra strap snapped off and her nipples spilled over the top of the pushup cups. Just as it slowed her bra back clasp finally bent and ripped flopping the bra cups onto the floor. The glow stopped, but this time Jessica saw it?she was a little mad her friend didn?t tell her all about this new necklace. Amy grabbed the 3XL clothes and attempted to put the new 42F Bra, baby blue with flowers?Amy gets the cups over her massive tits but barely fastens the back clasp?The skirt she got fits great in the waist?but sits just 3 inches below her waist, this would have to do. Her new baby blue panties hugged her ass so well she actually felt sexy looking in the mirror. After she gets her tight button shirt on and the jacket that barely fits she is going to attempt to make it to the parking lot?Jessica makes sure the hallway is clear and leads Amy to the parking lot. Amy thought to herself what a great friend she is for helping her so much, everyone else must be wrong when they say she is always looking out for number one. Jessica Suggested they go out tonight to celebrate their crazy day?Amy usually a homebody reluctantly agrees. Unfortunately she only has the outfit Jessica bought that fits her to wear out?but oh well her tits look hot in that new bra and tight shirt, and the short skirt might finally get her some attention from the fellas.

She gets picked up in Jessica?s SUV since she barely fits in her little Honda Civic. Jessica looks great, tube top that showed off her 38DD?s very well, her skirt was a little longer but she made no secret of what color underwear she had?the tops of her polka dot bra and the straps of the matching thong were exposed just to help her one up her newly tall friend?this still pissed her off, why her, why can she get all the attention even though she doesn?t want it? As they arrive at the valet everyone stares in awe at the new Amy and her sexy new look. Jessica got looks but definitely was upstaged by her best friend. Jessica suggests they go straight to the dance floor for some grindin with the guys?Amy isn?t very comfortable dancing. Amy and Jessica dance alone for a few songs but then some guys come over and are all over Amy, she hated this. She got more and more nervous as they danced with her in the front and back, they laughed at her?she got so mad at this. Her breathing sped up as Jessica waited for the gem to start glowing. Sure as a light switch the gem turns on and Amy begins to feel the heat, slowly since she just isn?t as passionate as some people?like Jessica. Jessica is getting mad watching her friend about to pop out of her clothes and be the object of affection for every guy in there. Amy?s shirt quickly lost three buttons and her blue floral bra sprang into view. Her skirt also slid quickly up her ass exposing the bottom of her bottom and her panties. Jessica decided to try something. Just as the gem got to full glow and heat Jessica quickly reached out and unfastened the necklace from her neck. It falls down her big cleavage and onto the floor at her feet. As she bends over for her gem she realizes the strobe lights and tight skirt are making it hard to see the gem she looks all around herself to no avail?she turns. There stands her friend Jessica quickly attaching the glowing crystal to her neck. They both feel a shudder as Jessica feels the warmth for the first time. Amy feels no warmth in fact she feels pretty normal. Then in a flash Amy?s world changed again. She felt her skirt creep down her ass and get looser at the waist, it recovers the panties and continues getting longer and longer on her legs?and her ass began to almost implode back to its lackluster former self causing the waist to need a hand to hold her pants and panties up. As this happened Jessica felt her round ass begin to expand slowly at first raising the mini-skirt hem up and onto her round ass exposing tan ass with a thong stretching into place, further and further, Amy however, her ass finally shrunk all the way back to normal size as the waist of her skirt now hung loosely around her legs and waist. Just as Amy began to cry as she lost her sexy body in front of all these people Jessica?s bubble butt burst out of the ass of her skirt the seam reached its limit on her ass and popped the vertical seam, exposing a polka dot thong deep in her fantastic ass. Amy was ok as long as she kept some of the new breast she gained, but that would be TOO good to be true?Amy?s tits deflated from their 45H size back to her respectable 36D in the matter of a minute. Amy in a panic tried to hold her bra up and keep it tight, but to no avail. She was now left standing with a 3XL skirt at her feet, a big pair of panties in her hand and a bra that looked like an open umbrella on her chest. She had returned totally to normal and wobbled out the door to grab a cab sobbing all the way. Jessica just giggled again as she anticipated what was next for her transformation. She just ate up this attention and started really feeling hot Her tube top pulled up a little on her waist as she became taller and down on the top exposing more cleavage and polka dot bra as her tits slowly begin to swell, and then finally Jessica got those big tits she had envied for last day?As her skirt flutters to the ground her tube top begins to rip down the sides and pull down in the front slipping over her breasts and exposing her entire tightening bra front to the people. The club patrons get a step by step view of her polka dotted bra, finally the top pops off in the front and rips off her body. She stands on the floor loving this new feeling, her thong straps snap and she instinctively clutches her pussy with the material but then decides she doesn?t care. Just as Amy is arriving home to take a much needed nap Jessica is counting down with the crowd the moments of her bra popping off, ?Alright folks?cups pop open, wire breaks, strap stretches, nipples pop out, strap SNAPS?strap SNAPS?nothing happened?she looked down and felt it?the gem was gone?she noticed a woman leaving out the door in a haste as her perspective slowly got smaller and smaller until she was left embarrassed running around in a stretched out floppy bra trying to find her clothes, ?I will find it again!? Jessica says in a huff.

Meanwhile back at Amy?s house, she rests and tries to forget all that happened. In a deep sleep she doesn?t notice that the room seems to be getting warmer, causing Amy to sweat. She rolled onto her back and continued to sleep. Amy?s body began to increase in size very quickly much faster then at her office; she remains sound asleep during all of this. Her tank top straps quickly snap off and her legs push over the edge of the bed. The bed creaks under the new weight of Amy?s growing body. She finally awakens just as her bed crashes to the floor and her tits burst her shirt open, the growth stops and Amy lets out another embarrassed scream!!!...

Jessica?s morning was also full of surprises. She first awoke at 7am with her alarm; she was quite groggy from the night before. She showered and put on a white bra and white boy short panties. After fastening the bra she began to feel very lightheaded and dizzy. She loses her balance and falls onto the bed. As she sleeps warmth washes over her body stemming from the area where the gem necklace was. Her breasts slowly swell into the cups of the bra and then grow a few cup sizes larger, she also gets proportionately taller riding her panties up a little her shoulders and larger rounder breasts pulled the bra straps taught the threads and seams are each being pulled near the breaking point. She again awakens at 8am, now very late for work she scrambles to finish getting ready and make it to work. As Jessica walks by the mirror she notices that her breasts are pushing out over the cups of the bra exposing her nipples, pulling the straps out tight as a guitar string, and that her head barely gets in the mirror. Jessica didn?t really want to believe that she was growing again so she just denied it as bloating. She puts on a larger cup size floral bra she bought that had an incorrect tag she guessed its size to be 38F, and some matching full panties. She only fits in her long skirt from her interview that was formerly too conservative. The skirt was now just at the knees and hugged her ass and hips very tightly. She had one big problem; none of her tight low cut shirts fit her appropriately anymore. She tried on revealing shirt after revealing shirt and with all of them her bra cups and breasts bulged over the top. Jessica knew that the local Big-Mart was open and would have something that would get her by for today. As she pulls into the parking lot of the huge store she fails to notice her sandals getting tighter and the creaks and strains of her bra as she wiggles out of the car. In the woman?s department she quickly finds a sensible button up black shirt. She heads into the fitting room to try the blouse, she is tripped up by her sandal strap breaking, and she mumbles a curse and heads into the small fitting room. After she enters and locks the door she removes her large college t shirt. As she looks in the mirror she begins to notice something, she swears she can see her breasts getting larger and herself getting taller, her bra seems to be hugging her soft flesh tighter and the wire seems to be creaking and shifting in the material but she must get to work strange bloating or not. She swore this couldn?t be the necklace and begins to button up the new blouse. She has a hard time buttoning the top button and pulls hard to finally fasten it. Within two seconds the buttons pull taught and the gaps between them open wider. The flowers on her bra can be slightly seen through the gaps. She decides she must need a bigger shirt but just as she raises her hands to the front buttons the top tight button pops off and hits the mirror. Jessica is beginning to realize what is happening, she feels what Amy felt she is scared and embarrassed. She knows she must escape but she is frozen watching herself in the mirror. The growth seems to stop and Jessica can relax. Just as she turns to get undressed and try another shirt she glances in the mirror and notices her skirt rising higher on her legs up to her shapely ass. She panics as her head moves out of the long mirrors view and the panic starts again. Her head begins to rise higher over the short door of the fitting room. Immediately a female store clerk sees her head poking over the door. She approaches slowly to see if this customer needs assistance. Just as the clerk gets close Jessica?s new shirt reaches its limit in her expanding bust and loses two more buttons they land at the store person?s feet. Jessica begins to cry just as her large floral bra begins to push into view. She tries to lean down to pick up the buttons of the unpaid garment and simultaneously busts the door of the room open to the whole store, and rips the ass of her skirt her round ass now beginning to envelop her flower print panties. She looks up in embarrassment as many onlookers have gathered to witness this strange occurrence. She reaches her hands up to close the front of her shirt around her surging satin floral cupped breasts. She ends up pulling the back open exposing the back of the bra creaking and stretching to fit her growing body. Her skirt zipper bursts down the side and the skirt flutters to the ground followed by the shirts remains. She panics and makes a break for the front entrance door, banging her head on lights as she goes. She reaches the front of the store and is freaked to find that she can longer fit out the door. She turns to the employees and onlookers now very embarrassed. She looks down very red in the face just as her bra straps begin to break thread by thread. First she hears the small threads snapping as the right shoulder strap snaps off, her right breast bounces and almost falls out of the cups both of her nipples can now be seen. The next sound is her panties ripping up the sides and back and finally rips off. Jessica covers her pussy with the torn panties and then the left bra strap snaps allowing her tits to jiggle right out of the cups. Her back strap snaps just as the dizzy feeling from earlier returns. She falls with a huge boom onto the floor. The patrons and employees gaze as the 25foot woman that just grew before their eyes shrinks slowly back down to normal size and lays naked next to a snapped bra and torn panties.

2 Months Later?



Amy is on her way by plane to Jamaica for some much needed alone time and thought; thoughts aside from growing out of her clothes in public only to shrink out of them looking ridiculous in the process. She sighed deeply and felt a slight warm feeling on her upper chest where the gem had once glowed and started this whole mess. Amy quickly got into the lavatory. She felt the tingle but it wasn?t not nearly as intense as the other growths. She looked down at her ample 36D breasts and noticed a slight space beginning to widen between the simple snaps of her pink silk shirt. She also felt her jean skirt begin to creep up a few inches making it sexier but not inappropriate. Her decorative thick belt was slowly tightening on her waist. Made to fit snug already this belt was now beginning to hurt. Just as she began to feel her tits swelling inside her large full coverage pink bra, the kind with thicker straps made for comfort and extra support for busty women such as her; there was a knock on the door. Amy maintained her mostly calm state and simply let the passenger know she would be out in minute. As she stood back up slowly arching her head backwards to get a final full look at herself in the mirror she popped the top snap on her shirt open which thankfully didn?t really expose her too bad. She stepped out of the restroom and returned to her seat. As she walked she failed to notice her skirt creeping up another inch or so revealing even more thigh and getting quite close to uncovering her ass. As she bent to get into her middle seat she gave all the men on the right side of the plane a small show, they didn?t get to see much ass but if there was a airline pop quiz on what type of panties the busty brunette is wearing I bet many of the men and some women would answer pink with black polka dotted regular panty. She worked her way down into her seat feeling a lot better knowing she could still get into it and travel comfortably for the rest of the flight. She had really lucked out at the check in booth and got an exit seat in an empty row due to last minute cancellations. She actually was so peaceful she forgot all about the fact that she just grew 1 or 2 overall clothing sizes. Amy felt so mellow she wanted to kill some time with a nap. After the helpful flight attendant Robyn tracked down a pillow blanket set, Amy was internally relieved to see her blanket set was big and tall perfect to keep her whole body warm for the nap. She lies across the empty seats and tucks herself in for the final 3 hours of the trip.

3 Hours from Jamaica?

As Amy sleeps deeply totally disconnected from the plane and all other goings on she begins to get slightly warm all over. She has been dealing with this deep unwakeable sleep ever since the first gem incident. She begins to do a slight wiggle as her body tingles in that quite familiar way. Underneath the big blanket Amy?s shirt begins to get tighter all over her sleeves unbutton easily and creep up her arms very slowly. Her skirt also moves another inch up about 3 inches from the bottom of her ass. Her legs, hips, and booty are all making this skirt stretch and groan. She nearly wakes and her shoulder pops a small tear open in the sleeve stitches of the silk shirt.

2 Hours from Jamaica?

The sounds emitting from the slowly stretching, popping, and tearing material of Amy?s outfit do nothing to wake her, and really aren?t causing much of a disruption for the other passengers. Between spring breakers and the ambient noise of the plane muffles any of the strange sounds from under Amy?s blanket. As Amy turns back onto her back still deeply asleep she almost stretches her lengthening legs into the isle tripping a middle aged woman. She luckily pulls her legs in and turns back on her side before she caused anything bad. As she curls up a little more under her blanket her skirt button pops open unzipping the front in the process. The tight denim finally reaches its limit and tears slightly before simply rising up over ad past her expanding ass. If Amy were awake I am sure she would be quite embarrassed by this slow stripping in public at the hands of her own bodily growth. Just as her skirt seams ripped up the side and created what would look like a Madonna fashion statement, a denim ?belt? with pink panties. Unfortunately for Amy as they neared the islands her spot were the gem used to be got warmer then before?

1 Hour from Jamaica?

After another hour or so on her side Amy rolled back onto her back finally popping the final threads holding her skirt on her waist. It slid down quietly in between the seats. Her chest began to swell at least another cup size as the shirt buttons become taught from the pressure. Just as Amy takes a deep yawn the next 2 snaps opened up. If she were uncovered all these folks would get a second show. Her next snap gives up and her whole shirt draws open exposing her pink bra cups filled to the max. The silk shirt also pulls open along the seam in the back as Amy rolls again her shirt slides off down under her seat by her bag. As the plane begins its decent Amy is awakened to sheer panic. She wants to scream as she peaks under her blanket to see her cleavage pushing over her conservative bra and her panties stretching around her ass and hips. As Robyn the flight attendant makes her final safety check Amy must now think fast to avoid embarrassment and the authorities. She had heard that her friend Jessica got charged with indecent exposure after her last spurt at Big Mart.

To make matter worse Amy begins to hear the all too familiar sound of her bra warping in the wire and cups and stretching out the straps and back. As Robyn gets a few rows away Amy decides to simply wrap herself in the blanket and claim she coughed or sneezed on it and should keep it. As she looked down from the isle for a moment Amy didn?t notice Robyn moving right past the row in front of her and snatch up the corner of the blanket. Amy can?t react quickly enough for the initial pull. Robyn?s tugging pulls down the blanket exposing her straps that are popping threads every moment and the top of her bra cups barely containing her tits anymore. Robyn gasps and quickly return the blanket to covering Amy?s body. Robyn was very confused but knew there was nothing to do until they land in 5 minutes.
Amy?s calm confidence was now totally thrown off and her fear of landing in a plane for the first time seemed to trigger a tingle up her spine. Masked by the brakes and engines no-one heard Amy?s thick left bra strap snap off letting her left cup drop exposing the tops of her nipple. Robyn swore she saw something happen but didn?t have a good sight line. After the plane stopped everyone exited before Amy. She had to figure out a way to wrap the blanket into some make shift dress. As she shuffled out of the plane holding her makeshift clothing up she noticed another passenger slouched down sleeping. By some insane twist of fate it was the same old woman who had traded her for the gem in the first place. She looked quite ill and Robyn broke the rules and told Amy that the woman had bad internal bleeding and she probably wont last until the medics arrive. The woman motioned to Amy, ?come here young Amy, I remember you well.? She then coughed up a mix of blood and other gross matter she said with her last full breath??Decide, awarder, size controller! With this spell as long as you wear one piece of the jewelry from my wrist or hand you can control other women?s growth or more practically clothes tightening/bursting, you passed the test, you deserve it, your friend Jessica will soon be punished for stealing the powers I bestowed on you? The woman moved surprisingly fast removing her rings and bracelets and stuffing them into Amy?s bag. She then sadly went limp and passed away. After the woman?s eyes closed Amy felt herself shrink back to normal and luckily had something to change into until she could get her luggage and begin her vacation. Amy wasn?t sure about whether the gem was a fluke and these rings were just for show. She figured here in Jamaica with all the snotty young college girls would be a perfect test of her supposed new powers and magic prowess.

She decided to get some small payback on the flight attendant Robyn. Amy saw her walking towards her in the jet way she quickly slipped a ring on her finger. She wasn?t sure how it worked but all she could think of was to mumble under breadth as they passed was ?buttons pop!? A few seconds of walking by each other Amy turned just in time to see Robyn?s 6 uniform buttons pop off exposing her red lace pushup bra. Her skirt button also popped almost causing her skirt to fall down. As Robyn screamed and made a run for the plane Amy also mentioned ?bra strap pop.? Just as Robyn made it on the empty plane her bra straps snapped off bouncing her tits and almost causing her bra to fall off?Robyn would never really know why this occurred.


Later that day at Amy?s resort?

[Mattariel]

There are a lot of blocks of text that are simply too large.

Remember one of the rules of writing: any dialog requires at the very least a new line, but more accurately, a whole new line-break/paragraph. As annoying as this may be, it will help make this story easier to read. I won't make any excuses for myself since I'm both tired and ill (each making the other worse) but I struggled to keep track of which line I was reading after a while, I tended to keep stopping and starting as I relocated where I was.

[Abazaba]

Eh, well stories of this matter hardly follow the grammar to a T but this is done well. Its a great story and hope to see more chapters added when you get the time. As for grammar and spelling they aren't as big of a concern as people make them out to be. Even I who is normally all over mistakes like that will lax them on stories of this nature. All thats really needed is it to be good enough so that the story isn't hard to read.

Eh, if you really want to work on grammar do that after you are a few chapters in. Then go back and refine all the works. Its not only a great time killer if you get blocked but it also helps keep the story fresh in your mind as you work on the next chapters in your head. Or thats what my HS English teacher said when I was working on a Novel I will never finish if I live to be a hundred. ><;

[whackadoodle1]

Originally Posted by Mattariel

There are a lot of blocks of text that are simply too large.

Remember one of the rules of writing: any dialog requires at the very least a new line, but more accurately, a whole new line-break/paragraph. As annoying as this may be, it will help make this story easier to read. I won't make any excuses for myself since I'm both tired and ill (each making the other worse) but I struggled to keep track of which line I was reading after a while, I tended to keep stopping and starting as I relocated where I was.

It's not like he's going to get this published or anything. I give it a big thumbs up anyway. The original version of this story wasn't bad either, but I like your improvements.

Great story! It does seem a little odd with "If Amy were awake I am sure she would be quite embarrassed by this slow stripping in public". I would prefer "If Amy were awake it is sure she would be quite embarrassed by this slow stripping in public" or "If Amy were awake she would for sure be quite embarrassed by this slow stripping in public". The growth speed and description was well done. Thanks for posting.

[Mr Wayne]

GrowSpaz,

The subject line pretty much sums it up but I also wanted to show my votes for the continuation of your story. Even as short as the revised version is, it packs alot of good quality growth this forum hasn't seen for some time. Keep up the good work.

[gts4me]

Originally Posted by tsokei

Great story! It does seem a little odd with "If Amy were awake I am sure she would be quite embarrassed by this slow stripping in public". I would prefer "If Amy were awake it is sure she would be quite embarrassed by this slow stripping in public" or "If Amy were awake she would for sure be quite embarrassed by this slow stripping in public". The growth speed and description was well done. Thanks for posting.

You don't need any of that "sure" stuff.

If Amy were awake, she would be quite embarassed by this slowing stripping in public.

It's obvious that it is sure without stating it. Stating it makes it redundant.

[growspaz]

I have always thought if you look for a problem you will always find one, why be so negative. Enjoy my stories because I enjoy writing them. I'm no grammar guru but I am confident in the structure of any sentence in any story. Any ideas as too the situation or cause of my next growth situation please reply and let me know your ideas

[Mr Wayne]

Growspaz,

Hmmmmmm, well I really like where you've driven this story thus far so why not spread the effects to anyone/everyone. Jessica swiped the necklace from Amy, then someone (would be a first theory to continue with this person) swiped it on the dance floor from Jessica. Why not continue this trend and/or shake it up a lil? Why I said above, everyone, because you added a convenient and good effect that after being rid of the necklace they still (to some degree) experience it's effects. Kinda like a curse, that might eventually wither away or explode into one 50foot spurt of unexpected growth. Hope this helps as I'll be looking forward to the next installment. Good luck and happy writing.