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Uber shy
Join Date: Feb 2008
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Well hello Process board
Here are some TG sequences I drew up-I hope it's ok for a lurker to shamelessly advertise himself like that
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Just a wanderer
Join Date: Oct 2005
Location: Montreal, Canada
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Re: Well hello Process board
You might want to be more careful around head size. I think you might have made them a bit too small, compared to the rest of the body.
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Leecher
Join Date: Apr 2007
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Re: Well hello Process board
Your work looks great! Some of the poses are stiff, especially in the third one, but a solid start. The first sequence is my favorite. Thanks for contributing!
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Process Disciple
Join Date: Apr 2008
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Re: Well hello Process board
Good work! Thanks for sharing
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Join Date: Apr 2008
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Re: Well hello Process board
Not bad.
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You know you like it!
Join Date: Jan 2006
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Re: Well hello Process board
Not bad at all!
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Join Date: Sep 2008
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Re: Well hello Process board
Aside from technicalities (I figure others will be more than happy to point them out), good sequences.
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Uber shy
Join Date: Feb 2008
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Re: Well hello Process board
Thank you for the kind words everyone
![]() And thank you for the feedback,too,I really want to keep sequences like that coming and knowing what looks off or could be improved really helps ![]() (Especially the head size seems to be an issue now ![]() |
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Join Date: Apr 2008
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Re: Well hello Process board
Not bad for your 1st dive into posting.
If I had any criticisms it's that you need to practice your body proportions abit more. |
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Join Date: Jun 2006
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Re: Well hello Process board
This. Good potential. Remember, practice does not necessarily make perfect, it just ingrains habits. Make sure these are habits you want. Make a point of measuring proportions until the proportioning becomes second nature. There are some other minor technical issues too but those can come later. I preach that you need to perfect proper proportions prior to poses and perspective to achieve your potential.
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Join Date: Oct 2009
Location: Ontario, Canada
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Re: Well hello Process board
Perhaps.
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Join Date: Feb 2008
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Re: Well hello Process board
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