Reworked story - Abby's Ascension

[effjoo]

This is a rewrite of a story I made earlier (Red Diamond). I've got part two almost done already, but it needs heavier editing. Hopefully people enjoy this and it's easier to read than the previous one.
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Abby is a normal girl who comes to possess a very unique gem. It gives her powers to reshape herself and those around her in any way she wants. But, as with any power, there is a cost, and in this case the source of the power is the energy of others.

[effjoo]

Chapter 2 went up on literotica: www.literotica.com/s/abbys-ascension-ch-02

[norz]

What kind of process content is in the stories?

[effjoo]

Originally Posted by norz

What kind of process content is in the stories?

The process is the main character shape shifting and reforming her own body.

I know it's not super common but I really like stories where the protagonist has the ability to shapeshifter and change. Part of my inspiration is the Body Shifters Universe story: Sarah's Transformation

I'm trying I capture some of the feel of that story, while also creating my own rules. In this story the main character is probably easiest described as a succubus, but different in that she's not definitely a demon. I'm still sorting out where I want this to go and what the rules of her powers will be. I also need to find someone to edit for me. It's really tough to do a decent job of editing yourself. I reread the latest chapter again (5th time) and I still found a bunch of things I'd like to revise as well as dramatic issues.