My breast expansion webcomic and so much more

hrist · 08-20-2007

Hello, I just found this forum a few days ago, I wish I had found it earlier.

I have been making tg breast expanding, shrinking females and so much more webcomics, I love these themes in webcomics and think there there needs to be more of them.

I've really liked what I've seen here on the forum, I hope i can make my comic more awesome too, here is a page from the start of it as the main character is turnend into a girl and grows big boobs, she is later shrunken and now there is a larger cast so lots of fun is happeneng.

I want to do more of these comics but you have to start somewhere

it also has a mini series to show off quick jokes, in this 5th installment one of the main characters is doing her usual of shrinking people and enlarging their breasts : )

Also I noticed there were roleplaying threads on this forum dealing with rp about expanding breasts, shrinking, and other themes, I'm looking for roleplaying partneers to have some fun with, there's a better thread on one of the other threads, but if anyone likes roleplaying these themes I would love to do that too

: D

08-20-2007

A tad sketchy, and the colouring/shading makes it hard to focus on what a character looks like, but it's got potential.

Brainfuck · 08-20-2007

Yes, I am being an ass. But seriously, learn the difference between "your" and "you're".

08-20-2007

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Originally Posted by Brainfuck

Yes, I am being an ass. But seriously, learn the difference between "your" and "you're".

Screw you, since when did spelling count on the internet, sure its nice but when its as minor as your and you're.

This is really good comic and it's very much appreciated. I love the style.

Brainfuck · 08-20-2007

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Originally Posted by Flip M

Screw you, since when did spelling count on the internet, sure its nice but when its as minor as your and you're.

This is really good comic and it's very much appreciated. I love the style.

Hey, I did say I was being an ass. And spelling has counted on the Internet all the time I've been here. Perhaps, I only dwell in those places where it does. But I do not endorse bad spelling. That's my point.

PrBlahBlahtson · 08-20-2007

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Originally Posted by Flip M

Screw you, since when did spelling count on the internet, sure its nice but when its as minor as your and you're.

This is really good comic and it's very much appreciated. I love the style.

Since Tone can't be conveyed easily, the way you spell things actually has a pretty big influence over how your message will be interpreted. Typically typos and poor grammar will progressively lead others to think you're a drooling mouth-breather that's putting no effort or thought into what you're doing or saying.

But yeah, in this case, it wasn't too important. Pretty sure Brainfuck just wanted to use the image meme and worked it in. God knows I've done the same.

08-20-2007

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Originally Posted by PrBlahBlahtson

Since Tone can't be conveyed easily, the way you spell things actually has a pretty big influence over how your message will be interpreted. Typically typos and poor grammar will progressively lead others to think you're a drooling mouth-breather that's putting no effort or thought into what you're doing or saying.

But yeah, in this case, it wasn't too important. Pretty sure Brainfuck just wanted to use the image meme and worked it in. God knows I've done the same.

Alright, I was just annoyed to see someone complain over your and you're. I Overreacted.

Any who lets get back on topic about the comic now =)

cannonfodder · 08-20-2007

Uhh...How about let's don't call people "stupid cunt" because of some insignificant grammatical or spelling errors? When someone is actually being productive, sharing freely, and new to the site, that kind of 3rd grade bullshit is not going to encourage others who may have been thinking about posting new/original material for a bunch of foul-mouthed, ungrateful, impolite, nobodies to make snide comments about their efforts? Take a lesson from Shadow. The man (I think...) has rarely show concern for the feelings of another, yet even he did little more than post his honest opinion about the style in which it was drawn, without outright attacking the artist. Itscalled constructive critisism, you [insert insult of choice].

/rant

ryohji · 08-20-2007

I focuse on the comic, leaving the grammatical warfare. I don't want to be see as a rude person, but the drawing really needs practice. It is not very clear, even confused per moment. The foreshortenings are not good but it still a very delicate thing to master, even for pros, so no need to worry. In fact it is rather a question of practicing and taking time (And it is a guy who draw almost a page of comic per day who said that, shame on me). But I see a good potential on these pages. Don't feel discourage by what a breast elargement obsessed artist asshole wrote.

gammera1976 · 08-20-2007

The comic was a good start. And as for spelling, I've seen MUCH worse here and on other sites, so don't let it bother you.

Yermom · 08-20-2007

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Originally Posted by ryohji

I focuse on the comic, leaving the grammatical warfare. I don't want to be see as a rude person, but the drawing really needs practice. It is not very clear, even confused per moment. The foreshortenings are not good but it still a very delicate thing to master, even for pros, so no need to worry. In fact it is rather a question of practicing and taking time (And it is a guy who draw almost a page of comic per day who said that, shame on me). But I see a good potential on these pages. Don't feel discourage by what a breast elargement obsessed artist asshole wrote.

Focus; seen; "confused per moment" is better as "confusing at moments"; (comma); insert "is" ; (comma) ; drew; of "a" comic; omit the "a" before "good potential"; discouraged; enlargement. Just for starters...

I am soo bored today.

MadmanDarkHeretic · 08-20-2007

*sighs*

So much focus on words instead of polite commentary on the work. The comic is very poor. There's obvious enthusiasm, but two main things need significant work before it can really work.

The first is actually planning your comic so others can understand it. The style, format, use of word bubbles, organization is all over the place and not even consistent comic to comic. I'm used to reading them and I can't tell what's going on within any of the first ten outside of the beginning tg. Having an odd drawing style or changing coloring patterns is one thing, but if it is incredibly difficult to understand what's going on, few will be able to enjoy the work.

The second is the writing. Very few of the word bubbles come across as coherent. Even more, there's no real sense that there's an actual plan or story behind it. I know character A shrunk/tg'ed/be'd character B. From the others I read, I have no real idea what else is going on or even what's going on between them interacting following that. This is partially a side effect of the comic organization, but more that the writing seems to lack direction and many of the statements come across incoherently. I would guess from them that English is not your first language (and may even be a third or fourth).

If so (and even if not) I'd suggest finding someone to bounce your comic delivery off of before you draw them, to help a bit with thinking about how to communicate it effectively. A drawing where it is easy to understand what's going on is far more effective in a comic format. Obsfucated art belongs in a museum or coffee house, where folks will actually tolerate the effort of sitting there for ten minutes trying to figure out what the artist was trying to do.

Ten cents, take it for what you will and good luck with your strip.

08-20-2007	#1
hrist shrinking girl Join Date: Aug 2007 Posts: 6	My breast expansion webcomic and so much more Hello, I just found this forum a few days ago, I wish I had found it earlier. I have been making tg breast expanding, shrinking females and so much more webcomics, I love these themes in webcomics and think there there needs to be more of them. I've really liked what I've seen here on the forum, I hope i can make my comic more awesome too, here is a page from the start of it as the main character is turnend into a girl and grows big boobs, she is later shrunken and now there is a larger cast so lots of fun is happeneng. I want to do more of these comics but you have to start somewhere it also has a mini series to show off quick jokes, in this 5th installment one of the main characters is doing her usual of shrinking people and enlarging their breasts : ) Also I noticed there were roleplaying threads on this forum dealing with rp about expanding breasts, shrinking, and other themes, I'm looking for roleplaying partneers to have some fun with, there's a better thread on one of the other threads, but if anyone likes roleplaying these themes I would love to do that too : D __________________ Divine Magicks http://www.divinemagicks.com Gender changing, bending, swapping and more at it's finest. Along with shrinking girls, magic, growing boobs and spaceships, it is awesome! My Gamer Dater Profile <3 http://www.gamerdater.com/index.php?...ile&profile=26

08-20-2007	#3
Brainfuck Fucking with your minds Join Date: Sep 2006 Posts: 46	Yes, I am being an ass. But seriously, learn the difference between "your" and "you're". __________________ Avatar by woot.

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gammera1976 Process Master Join Date: Apr 2006 Location: West of Boston, MA Posts: 589	Good start The comic was a good start. And as for spelling, I've seen MUCH worse here and on other sites, so don't let it bother you.

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08-20-2007	#2
shadow Guest Posts: n/a	A tad sketchy, and the colouring/shading makes it hard to focus on what a character looks like, but it's got potential.

08-20-2007	#8
cannonfodder redneckdemon Join Date: Aug 2006 Location: Wherever I happen to be at the moment. Usually drunk at the time, so details are hazy, at best. Posts: 141	Uhh...How about let's don't call people "stupid cunt" because of some insignificant grammatical or spelling errors? When someone is actually being productive, sharing freely, and new to the site, that kind of 3rd grade bullshit is not going to encourage others who may have been thinking about posting new/original material for a bunch of foul-mouthed, ungrateful, impolite, nobodies to make snide comments about their efforts? Take a lesson from Shadow. The man (I think...) has rarely show concern for the feelings of another, yet even he did little more than post his honest opinion about the style in which it was drawn, without outright attacking the artist. Itscalled constructive critisism, you [insert insult of choice]. /rant

08-20-2007	#9
ryohji Banned Join Date: Mar 2007 Location: In a pencile sharpener. Posts: 233	I focuse on the comic, leaving the grammatical warfare. I don't want to be see as a rude person, but the drawing really needs practice. It is not very clear, even confused per moment. The foreshortenings are not good but it still a very delicate thing to master, even for pros, so no need to worry. In fact it is rather a question of practicing and taking time (And it is a guy who draw almost a page of comic per day who said that, shame on me). But I see a good potential on these pages. Don't feel discourage by what a breast elargement obsessed artist asshole wrote.

08-20-2007	#12
MadmanDarkHeretic Bouncy Dragongirl of Love Join Date: Dec 2005 Posts: 432	sighs So much focus on words instead of polite commentary on the work. The comic is very poor. There's obvious enthusiasm, but two main things need significant work before it can really work. The first is actually planning your comic so others can understand it. The style, format, use of word bubbles, organization is all over the place and not even consistent comic to comic. I'm used to reading them and I can't tell what's going on within any of the first ten outside of the beginning tg. Having an odd drawing style or changing coloring patterns is one thing, but if it is incredibly difficult to understand what's going on, few will be able to enjoy the work. The second is the writing. Very few of the word bubbles come across as coherent. Even more, there's no real sense that there's an actual plan or story behind it. I know character A shrunk/tg'ed/be'd character B. From the others I read, I have no real idea what else is going on or even what's going on between them interacting following that. This is partially a side effect of the comic organization, but more that the writing seems to lack direction and many of the statements come across incoherently. I would guess from them that English is not your first language (and may even be a third or fourth). If so (and even if not) I'd suggest finding someone to bounce your comic delivery off of before you draw them, to help a bit with thinking about how to communicate it effectively. A drawing where it is easy to understand what's going on is far more effective in a comic format. Obsfucated art belongs in a museum or coffee house, where folks will actually tolerate the effort of sitting there for ten minutes trying to figure out what the artist was trying to do. Ten cents, take it for what you will and good luck with your strip.