The Foxy Lady: female werefox transformation comic!

[NightmareHero]

Warning this comic features full frontal nudity and a love scene!

I pulled an all-nighter to get this one done, I'm quite pleased with the results. I hope you approve. Comments are greatly appreciated.

http://www.savefile.com/files/1042248

The length of the nose is an little excessive. It would have been better if it had stayed at a similar length than Felicity (The Dreamland Chronicles) http://www.thedreamlandchronicles.co...?date=20070514

[NightmareHero]

Here's the Yahoo group I made for the comic: http://groups.yahoo.com/group/Nightm...xy_Lady_Comic/

[whackadoodle1]

Two words:

1) Fucking, and 2) Awesome! This is one of the best poser animal TFs I've ever seen! I'd love to see you do more animals.

[Dimples]

I enjoyed your sequence. It would be great to see a feline related TF in the future. Please, keep up the good work.

[ivan11422]

great job!

[Tyger]

Loved it. I never tired of your animal poser pics, but to have it in a sequence is phenominal! A++

[NightmareHero]

Originally Posted by Dimples

I enjoyed your sequence. It would be great to see a feline related TF in the future. Please, keep up the good work.

I plan to do a feline transformation animation once I've gained enough skill to know how to do the cloth rippage in a decent manner.

[SoylentOrange]

It was okay. The poser parts were fine, though you could stand to maybe frame the stuff a bit better- a few lines of panels showing each part of the TF might be nice froma process standpoint, but in terms of making a comic it's pretty boring visually.

The writing stinks. You seem to use the same words over and over, in very short, jarring sentances. if this is actually supposed to be a story, or some oher kind of narrative, you need to make the sentances flow into one another more often. And there were several parts where the apparent attempt at rhyming went awry.

All in all, I'd give it maybe a 5/10. IF you're going to try to make something in poser, you need to put the effort to distinguish it from the 5,000 other easily thrown-together Poser models.

[trc071880]

awesome stuff!! great job! might be the best poser sequence ive seen

[SoylentOrange]

Originally Posted by trc071880

awesome stuff!! great job! might be the best poser sequence ive seen

What, are you serious? How many have you seen, and by whom? What's the best poser sequence you've seen prior to this?

Either you haven't seen a lot of poser work, or you've just got really low standards, because while a good effort, this isn't anything I think anyone could objectively call the "Best" anything...

[JaeDy]

I've said it before and I'll say it again: I hate Poser.

I've said another thing before and I shall say it again: There are certain sequences which really, really do stand out and put 99.9% of Poser works to shame, and this is one of those pieces.

I especially enjoyed the detail in her. Actually, in all of the Were animals.

However, as with anything, there can be improvement, mainly in:

-The writing. Yeah, it isn't really that necessary at all. Unless you've really got one important, important way you want to express your work, or have spent about as much time writing as you have creating, I find it easier as a viewer just to make up my own, preferential story.

-The mer-man with the Superman cape. Dunno, to me that was actually quite a major turn-off, especiall considering the other mermaids which didn't need capes or anything to let them fly.

-I found the Wolfman to be very sexy, too. The only problem with him was that his sheath and balls were a little too small. I'm not someone who likes OVERLY big male genitalia, I usually don't mind too much as long as the guy is beautiful too, but to see him with her who has a vagina about the same size as his balls and sheath was just a little off.

Again, though, I overall enjoyed the piece very much ^.^/ I hope I haven't sounded rude in the points I made.