Anyone wanna proof read a story?

polarkrackin · 02-14-2008

I am going to be working on a sequel to something I "published" (for lack of a better term) on the overflowing bra, and I am looking for a proofreader.

If you are interested in reading the original, it is entitled "Far Beyond Hazing" by "Kracken De Polar"

I had some people tell me it had some parts that were a bit muddy or hard to understand. I personally have trouble proofing reading my own work since I know what is going on in my head so it makes it easy to fill in any gaps that I leave out. And it is easy to overlook those things. People did request more, so I guess it wasn't too bad. Got about 7.8k downloads since September of 2007. Anyways...

I would love to put another part of this story together, and perhaps make this next one more thought out. I really want it to flow how I imagined it, rather than leave anyone confused. If anyone out there would like to, just respond to me via private message or here on the forum.

BTW: It is kind of akward and hard to ask for something like this, due to the private nature of it. However, if you would like to be involved I would love help from anywhere I can get it.

Vengeance1701 · 02-14-2008

Sure, I'd be fine to help you.

polarkrackin · 02-14-2008

Cool, I will be sending stuff to ya through PM if that is alright

oneguynamed · 02-14-2008

I'd love to give it the twice-over if need be. I'm A literature Major so at least I can help with the punctuation.

Just let me know!

foxmaster5 · 02-15-2008

Ive done this a few times before, if you want Ill look over it. Being that you know im in AP compitision and took AP lit.

02-14-2008	#1
polarkrackin Process Fan Join Date: Jun 2005 Location: When i say the name of it people ask the state or the city... you pick Posts: 73	Anyone wanna proof read a story? I am going to be working on a sequel to something I "published" (for lack of a better term) on the overflowing bra, and I am looking for a proofreader. If you are interested in reading the original, it is entitled "Far Beyond Hazing" by "Kracken De Polar" I had some people tell me it had some parts that were a bit muddy or hard to understand. I personally have trouble proofing reading my own work since I know what is going on in my head so it makes it easy to fill in any gaps that I leave out. And it is easy to overlook those things. People did request more, so I guess it wasn't too bad. Got about 7.8k downloads since September of 2007. Anyways... I would love to put another part of this story together, and perhaps make this next one more thought out. I really want it to flow how I imagined it, rather than leave anyone confused. If anyone out there would like to, just respond to me via private message or here on the forum. BTW: It is kind of akward and hard to ask for something like this, due to the private nature of it. However, if you would like to be involved I would love help from anywhere I can get it.

02-14-2008	#2
Vengeance1701 Modest Moderator Join Date: Aug 2006 Posts: 3,998	Re: Anyone wanna proof read a story? Sure, I'd be fine to help you. __________________ Meh. Cranky and old.

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polarkrackin Process Fan Join Date: Jun 2005 Location: When i say the name of it people ask the state or the city... you pick Posts: 73	Re: Anyone wanna proof read a story? Cool, I will be sending stuff to ya through PM if that is alright

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oneguynamed Leecher Join Date: Feb 2006 Posts: 7	Re: Anyone wanna proof read a story? I'd love to give it the twice-over if need be. I'm A literature Major so at least I can help with the punctuation. Just let me know!

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