Ronzo Growth Commision Part 2: Fiction Project

dsojourn · 03-01-2007

::Update 12/23/08:: Update?! An actual update, seriously? No fucking way, I'm frightened. For anyone who hasn't read through this thread yet, it contains various pics and stories scattered throughout. Please do not be scared of much text and avoid finding the "good parts", lol. The newest entry is, naturally, all the way at the end.::

Greetings all. Some might recall the set of BE (+1 growth) commissions which I previously posted, having secured the awesome skills of Ronzo Murphy. Seeing as how the year's convention circuit has begun once more, and how Ronzo is, at the moment, actually open for non-Con commissions as well, some friends and I sought to aqcuire more art from his talented pen.

The general idea was that we shared the cost and pooled ideas, while I, the group's spokesman and most skilled with the written word, set the final commissions in stone and communicated with Ronzo when necessary. All went rather well and I picked up a completed set at KatsuCon. However, my co-conspiritors approached me with a radical new idea.

Rather then just post the images en masse, they suggested I write a growth fic to go along with each piece and post them individually, with the commissions serving as illustrations. As I am a writer of kinds, and as I had been talking about writing at least one growth fic for literally years, and as I was suffering a moment of foolishness disregarding my busy schedule, I agreed.

I will post the first story here below (as an attachment as it seems too long for cut and paste) The commissions are all anime-related, mostly rated PG-13 to definitely R (the stories will all be rated R), and feature gentle GTS of the amazon/mini-GTS category (which is the favorite of me and my "colleagues" and, in our humble opinion, the least represented GTS group).

I can't say for certain how long it will take to post the next story/image sets, although I can say for certain that the other fics will be shorter if I can help it, although the first isn't exactly a magnum opus. It took about a week to get this out with an hour or two of writing almost every day. I CAN say that the more feedback I receive, regardless of content yet preferably not two or three words, will most certainly speed the process. I know that's always an annoying request, but as there was a decent amount of time, money, and effort put into this it would be appreciated. Hope ya'll enjoy.

dsojourn · 03-01-2007

::Author's Note- For full details concerning this fiction see my post above. I hope everyone can read this file alright, it seemed too long to post all the individual bits spread across multiple posts here. This story is rated R for sexual stuffs and possibly naughty language.::

SoylentOrange · 03-01-2007

Very nice.

coolguy003 · 03-01-2007

That is long! Ill have to set aside alot of time to read it. I bet its great though.

Prophet Tenebrae · 03-01-2007

The commission is great... I'll have to get to reading this story, as soon as I can.

EchoWing · 03-01-2007

FMP-based growth? Cool.

dsojourn · 03-01-2007

I just noticed looking at the image from other computers at work that it looks absolutely gosh-awful quality here, blurred, dirty, and with a strange brown tinge near the center, whereas it looks crisp and clear from my home cpu. Does everyone see it this way or is it just the crappy computers here? If so, anyone have any recommendations for fixing it?

Silver Spoon · 03-01-2007

Pretty good story. I usually don't read long stories, but this was pretty neat.

gammera1976 · 03-01-2007

Now that's just too sweet! I love the show and to see the characters in this kind of fic is beyond my imagination!

Neko KK · 03-01-2007

i just love his style but one thing just dissapoints me... he does great art, but thats just it, he completly throws away the personality/characteristics of the characters...

Abazaba · 03-01-2007

Quote:

Originally Posted by dsojourn

I just noticed looking at the image from other computers at work that it looks absolutely gosh-awful quality here, blurred, dirty, and with a strange brown tinge near the center, whereas it looks crisp and clear from my home cpu. Does everyone see it this way or is it just the crappy computers here? If so, anyone have any recommendations for fixing it?

I would just re-scan the image and not compress it. Or scan it at a lower Dpi for a smaller file instead of a higher Dpi then compressing it.

FireStorm · 03-02-2007

Scanners can be a real problem like that. It might also be useful to give the scanner glass a wipe down with a damp cloth.

03-01-2007	#1
dsojourn Frequent Poster Join Date: May 2005 Posts: 432	Ronzo Growth Commision Part 2: Fiction Project ::Update 12/23/08:: Update?! An actual update, seriously? No fucking way, I'm frightened. For anyone who hasn't read through this thread yet, it contains various pics and stories scattered throughout. Please do not be scared of much text and avoid finding the "good parts", lol. The newest entry is, naturally, all the way at the end.:: Greetings all. Some might recall the set of BE (+1 growth) commissions which I previously posted, having secured the awesome skills of Ronzo Murphy. Seeing as how the year's convention circuit has begun once more, and how Ronzo is, at the moment, actually open for non-Con commissions as well, some friends and I sought to aqcuire more art from his talented pen. The general idea was that we shared the cost and pooled ideas, while I, the group's spokesman and most skilled with the written word, set the final commissions in stone and communicated with Ronzo when necessary. All went rather well and I picked up a completed set at KatsuCon. However, my co-conspiritors approached me with a radical new idea. Rather then just post the images en masse, they suggested I write a growth fic to go along with each piece and post them individually, with the commissions serving as illustrations. As I am a writer of kinds, and as I had been talking about writing at least one growth fic for literally years, and as I was suffering a moment of foolishness disregarding my busy schedule, I agreed. I will post the first story here below (as an attachment as it seems too long for cut and paste) The commissions are all anime-related, mostly rated PG-13 to definitely R (the stories will all be rated R), and feature gentle GTS of the amazon/mini-GTS category (which is the favorite of me and my "colleagues" and, in our humble opinion, the least represented GTS group). I can't say for certain how long it will take to post the next story/image sets, although I can say for certain that the other fics will be shorter if I can help it, although the first isn't exactly a magnum opus. It took about a week to get this out with an hour or two of writing almost every day. I CAN say that the more feedback I receive, regardless of content yet preferably not two or three words, will most certainly speed the process. I know that's always an annoying request, but as there was a decent amount of time, money, and effort put into this it would be appreciated. Hope ya'll enjoy. Last edited by dsojourn; 12-22-2008 at 11:37 PM.

03-01-2007	#4
coolguy003 Process Fan Join Date: Dec 2006 Posts: 41	That is long! Ill have to set aside alot of time to read it. I bet its great though. __________________ c u r r e n t \________________________

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Prophet Tenebrae Prophet Of Darkness Join Date: Jun 2005 Location: UK Posts: 1,792	The commission is great... I'll have to get to reading this story, as soon as I can. __________________ Female Transformation Chat! Female Transformation Uber Blog BE Story Club

03-01-2007	#3
SoylentOrange Process Disciple Join Date: May 2005 Posts: 4,920	Very nice.

03-01-2007	#6
EchoWing Process Master Join Date: Aug 2005 Posts: 837	FMP-based growth? Cool.

03-01-2007	#8
Silver Spoon Mostly gone Join Date: Aug 2006 Location: Philadelphia, PA Posts: 2,122	Pretty good story. I usually don't read long stories, but this was pretty neat.

03-01-2007	#9
gammera1976 Process Master Join Date: Apr 2006 Location: West of Boston, MA Posts: 589	Now that's just too sweet! I love the show and to see the characters in this kind of fic is beyond my imagination!

03-01-2007	#10
Neko KK Perverted Neko Ninja Join Date: Jul 2005 Posts: 330	i just love his style but one thing just dissapoints me... he does great art, but thats just it, he completly throws away the personality/characteristics of the characters...

03-02-2007	#12
FireStorm Banned Join Date: Oct 2006 Posts: 408	Scanners can be a real problem like that. It might also be useful to give the scanner glass a wipe down with a damp cloth.