Feedback?

[BoutiqueTiffy]

Hey all! I'm in the process of working on a long bimbo transformation story, and I just wanted to get people's feedback about my prologue. I've attached a .txt of it, and here's a little taste. Just looking for any feedback you can give me! Thanks!

The bubbly blond swayed her wide hips to the beat. It was the last week of her senior year, and likely the last party before college. As the thumping bass line penetrated into her soul, she closed her baby blue eyes and smiled broadly. Whenever the dance music played on the boom box, she always felt so free, so at peace with herself.
In the tiny Ohio suburb, she was able to enjoy a private but very social life for her first 18 years. Her parents were very well off. Her father worked for the government and her mother was a very successful lawyer, which lead her to spend many nights on the weekend either in her larger-than-average house or with friends at raucous parties. Tonight was one of those occasions. She had gone to one of her friend?s houses in the promise of a large end-of-the-year party, which certainly did not disappoint. With the music, the friends, and the laughter, she felt so? alive!

[olddude12]

It's interesting to have your main character start out with some bimbo tendencies. I'm looking forward to more, and I do hope bimboism triumphs in the end.