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12-31-2006
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Process Master
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Hand Maid May comic redux
So, here goes try number 2.
First try here. For now, the picture here is sort of a placeholder. It's a "prototype" of sorts. I'm just sketching out the first page layout. Also, I'm open to ideas. If I like 'em I'll probably use them. Edit ver. 2.8 : Page 28 up Second post collection here. Last edited by Sucht17; 04-15-2009 at 10:31 PM. |
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12-31-2006
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Process Disciple
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How about spending some time at midget and normal sizes? Trying on new clothes to grow out of.
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Process Disciple
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Yeah, maybe a little slower would be nice.
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I really liked this piece you did and im glad you're redoing it. I had one hell of a time following it the first time i saw it lol. No advice (mainly because im the last person who should give advice when it comes to art) if you're redoing it that’s good enough for me.
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Looking good so far
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Hmmmm....could be interesting.... |
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01-01-2007
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I liked the previous version of this as I really like growth from smaller than human size. I'm looking forward to seeing more of this one too!
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01-01-2007
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Electric Frankfurter
Join Date: May 2005
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Very cool. I like the idea of making a "direktors cut" of the comic. So you can make an allready great comic even better.
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01-01-2007
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This is fantastic! I love the fact that you're redoing it!
Personally, I always thought the sudden spurts were best and that's what I'd like to see again, but I'll enjoy whatever you put into it. ^^ |
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01-01-2007
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Even though I've never seen Hand Maid May, I really enjoyed your last attempt. If one thing needed improvement, I would say it would be the lettering. Keep it clear through the whole thing.
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01-01-2007
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Just be careful Sucht, the extra amount of pages that you'll need to do will probably test you. I know some artists who decided to make more detailed series type pics and found themselves burning out.
However, on the plus side, yeah....slow growth is a fun thing, one of my favourite processes of all, so if you go for it, and pull it off, it will win....and win big.
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When I did it the first time, I was able to balze out a page a night almost for about two weeks. But that's mostly becsue I had zero planning and just sketched the first thing on the page. This time I want to do it better. I felt that it's been a year, and this would be a good way to test how I've improved in a year. Also, I feel a bit of pressure to somehow outdo the original... |
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