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Unread 03-22-2010   #1
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My first try.

So I just got a tablet yesterday and I've never drawn on one before and I really haven't ever drawn any expansion based art before so I'm new to it and I'm not that great.

So this is my first drawing on my tablet, I don't expect anyone to like it.

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Unread 03-22-2010   #2
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Re: My first try.

Well. . . I like it alot! I've always had a fetish for large breasts ever since I was a little girl and am infatuated with giant boobs. . . but most of all. . .I like swollen areolas and puffy pink nipples. hehehe So although you feel this may not be great, I tell you it does it for me. hehehe (BE will be my favorite area of the forum) *wink*

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Well. . . I like it alot! I've always had a fetish for large breasts ever since I was a little girl and am infatuated with giant boobs. . . but most of all. . .I like swollen areolas and puffy pink nipples. hehehe So although you feel this may not be great, I tell you it does it for me. hehehe (BE will be my favorite area of the forum) *wink*

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I'm glad you like it, hopefully in the future i will be better and can draw more art you like.
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wow not bad for first timer keep up the work
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Re: My first try.

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So I just got a tablet yesterday and I've never drawn on one before and I really haven't ever drawn any expansion based art before so I'm new to it and I'm not that great.

So this is my first drawing on my tablet, I don't expect anyone to like it.

There are a lot of us here to help, don't go beating yourself up. Personally, I'm not sure if it's the tablet or some awkward image resizing, but it's mostly the lines that are a bit "off" to me. Try to smoothen them and make them more consistent. That way when you fill areas with color, they won't create those awkward areas of white that didn't get filled. There also needs to be a bit more space between her eye and the front of her nose, with the eye looking more like "half an eye" since you're drawing from profile perspective instead of head-on.

Also, save as .png. It'll preserve the quality of the picture better for when you want to go back and edit it. Are you using MSPaint to draw it in first?
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Re: My first try.

I'm using Corel painter essentials 4 as for the tablet its a wacom brand and its a bamboo.

The reason the lines are so off is because I'm still trying to get use to use pen and how hard I need to push, I see what your talking about with the eye I didn't think it looked right.

As for the file I couldn't seem to upload it onto photobucket from the corel program so I screenshoted it then opened it in paint and then uploaded it.
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Re: My first try.

Looks like a good first attempt, my only critique would be to experiment to make your own eyes and stray away from the anime looking eyes. Other than than just drawing, its the best way to get better!
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Looks like a good first attempt, my only critique would be to experiment to make your own eyes and stray away from the anime looking eyes. Other than than just drawing, its the best way to get better!
Thank you, I'll definitely be experimenting with a variety of styles.
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Re: My first try.

I like it. A lot.
You draw some juicy nipples and they're only gonna get juicyer as you improve. Your attempt to draw the hand instead of hiding it away shows promise since thats usually the bane of many beginnning artists, and your woman seems to be the appropriate height according to the size of her head. I bet you you were to do the whole body, she'd be quite proportionate, height-wise anyhow.
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I like it. A lot.
You draw some juicy nipples and they're only gonna get juicyer as you improve. Your attempt to draw the hand instead of hiding it away shows promise since thats usually the bane of many beginnning artists, and your woman seems to be the appropriate height according to the size of her head. I bet you you were to do the whole body, she'd be quite proportionate, height-wise anyhow.
I'm glad you like it! I'm really shocked that some people like it and it makes me really happy. My first time drawing on a tablet and people like it hehe. Regarding the hand Its not the best but I wasn't really putting much effort into it, I didn't even consider hiding it.

Well maybe in the future after I have some more practice I'll come back to this drawing and redo it.
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Re: My first try.

from a critiquing standpoint, Its a good first try, I agree with most of whats being said, but on the face, there is a line below the lips i believe you put in to kind of show where the chin meets the end of the mouth, but the way its portrayed, you've got a bit of a double chin look. If you wanted to show this better, id have the skin reach out and connect to the lips rather than just throwing in the line.
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