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Unread 02-14-2012   #1
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First DA Submission- Ranma 1/2 Cow TF

Dear god, I've finally submitted a story to DA and I've gotta say...I HATE html. It messed up the spacing and indention on my story pretty badly, but I fixed what I could...at any rate, I made this story for a contest being run over on DA in the hopes of, at best, winning some free art, and at worst, being halfway entertaining.

If you'd prefer to read the version on DA with the junky spacing issues, that can be found here.

If you'd prefer the original, I will include that here as well in a Word document.

The method of transformation was part of the contest, as was most of what is included in the changes. Let me know how much it sucks, or if it's any good at all. Have fun.
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I like it.
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This was quality work.
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Re: First DA Submission- Ranma 1/2 Cow TF

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Glad to know, thanks!

If I may ask, what exactly was it that you liked or found to be good quality? This was my first successful attempt at a process-story (initiation story for an RP site not included), and I'd like to know what's working well and what isn't.

On a side-note...I got informed today that I managed to take 1st place in the contest! This means a celebration! Drinks all around! Half of them will be laced with TF agents, but I'm not telling you which!
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It's a very good start, I look forward to seeing if you do any more fics.
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Not too bad of a story and congrats on winning first place.
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Re: First DA Submission- Ranma 1/2 Cow TF

The story is enjoyable but if I didn't know the characters I would be completely lost. But that is what makes writing fan fiction so easy, you can use already existing characters. But this statement asside, the story is very good.
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Do you plan on continuing it?
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The story is enjoyable but if I didn't know the characters I would be completely lost. But that is what makes writing fan fiction so easy, you can use already existing characters.
Agreed. Lack of ideas prevents me from doing much in the way of trying to be original...that and laziness. However, I do have one or two ideas for original characters, and plan to craft some stories for those as well, once I get the ideas fully-formed. May take a while, but if and when it does, I'll bring it to the attention of the forum. Mind, transformation is not my typical thing to write about, so it'll likely be in a different section.

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This story was written purely for the purpose of the contest, and as such, it is already complete...however, I have had one or two nagging ideas for a sequel. If I act on them, then yes, I'll probably post the continuation in this thread.
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Agreed. Lack of ideas prevents me from doing much in the way of trying to be original...that and laziness. However, I do have one or two ideas for original characters, and plan to craft some stories for those as well, once I get the ideas fully-formed. May take a while, but if and when it does, I'll bring it to the attention of the forum. Mind, transformation is not my typical thing to write about, so it'll likely be in a different section.
I can. very well. relate to that ^^.
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Reminds me of that classic set of Gouly pics that had the girls all changing into cowgirls from some Gypsy curse. Good work!
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Reminds me of that classic set of Gouly pics that had the girls all changing into cowgirls from some Gypsy curse. Good work!
Good eyes- that was the inspiration. I only had a day to make my contest entry because I found out about it so late, and I needed an idea fast. Those pictures came to mind, and I tweaked it so the changes were caused by the cowgirl virus instead, in accordance with the contest rules.
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