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Atrocious Pokegirl
Join Date: Apr 2008
Location: Kapol's Place
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First DA Submission- Ranma 1/2 Cow TF
Dear god, I've finally submitted a story to DA and I've gotta say...I HATE html. It messed up the spacing and indention on my story pretty badly, but I fixed what I could...at any rate, I made this story for a contest being run over on DA in the hopes of, at best, winning some free art, and at worst, being halfway entertaining.
If you'd prefer to read the version on DA with the junky spacing issues, that can be found here. If you'd prefer the original, I will include that here as well in a Word document. The method of transformation was part of the contest, as was most of what is included in the changes. Let me know how much it sucks, or if it's any good at all. Have fun.
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Slave to the Process Forum
Join Date: May 2005
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Re: First DA Submission- Ranma 1/2 Cow TF
I like it.
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Would be Evil Mastermind
Join Date: May 2006
Location: The Salt Mines of Detroit
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Re: First DA Submission- Ranma 1/2 Cow TF
This was quality work.
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Atrocious Pokegirl
Join Date: Apr 2008
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Re: First DA Submission- Ranma 1/2 Cow TF
Glad to know, thanks!
![]() If I may ask, what exactly was it that you liked or found to be good quality? This was my first successful attempt at a process-story (initiation story for an RP site not included), and I'd like to know what's working well and what isn't. On a side-note...I got informed today that I managed to take 1st place in the contest! This means a celebration! Drinks all around! Half of them will be laced with TF agents, but I'm not telling you which!
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Join Date: Feb 2008
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Re: First DA Submission- Ranma 1/2 Cow TF
It's a very good start, I look forward to seeing if you do any more fics.
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Join Date: Jan 2006
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Re: First DA Submission- Ranma 1/2 Cow TF
Not too bad of a story and congrats on winning first place.
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Amateur writer
Join Date: Mar 2006
Posts: 547
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Re: First DA Submission- Ranma 1/2 Cow TF
The story is enjoyable but if I didn't know the characters I would be completely lost. But that is what makes writing fan fiction so easy, you can use already existing characters. But this statement asside, the story is very good.
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Re: First DA Submission- Ranma 1/2 Cow TF
Do you plan on continuing it?
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Atrocious Pokegirl
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Re: First DA Submission- Ranma 1/2 Cow TF
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This story was written purely for the purpose of the contest, and as such, it is already complete...however, I have had one or two nagging ideas for a sequel. If I act on them, then yes, I'll probably post the continuation in this thread.
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Re: First DA Submission- Ranma 1/2 Cow TF
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Join Date: May 2006
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Re: First DA Submission- Ranma 1/2 Cow TF
Reminds me of that classic set of Gouly pics that had the girls all changing into cowgirls from some Gypsy curse. Good work!
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Atrocious Pokegirl
Join Date: Apr 2008
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Re: First DA Submission- Ranma 1/2 Cow TF
Good eyes- that was the inspiration. I only had a day to make my contest entry because I found out about it so late, and I needed an idea fast. Those pictures came to mind, and I tweaked it so the changes were caused by the cowgirl virus instead, in accordance with the contest rules.
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