Another new story of mine

[ryansgalant]

So I was bored to tears in my lecture class, and began typing a story. This is the product of about an hours worth of work on my part, with a bit of proof reading later.

While most of my stories are quite adult in nature, I'm thinking I will either delay any adult material, or eliminate it all together in this one. Critiques, comments, and suggestions are alway welcome.

The title of the story is "The Falcon's Book", and here's the first two chapters.

[ivan11422]

Awesome work. Can't wait for more.

[ryansgalant]

Ahh, there are many things like, but none more satisfying that Ivan's approval. Thanks bud.

[TF-Viewer]

I'm interested in seeing where this goes.

[ryansgalant]

Originally Posted by TF-Viewer

I'm interested in seeing where this goes.

I'd be lying if I didn't say I felt the same. There's something about the way this story feels, as I write it, that's different.

[ryansgalant]

I had these written when I posted the first two chapters, I just hadn't proof read them, which I finally managed to do. I hope you like them, and welcome any feedback. Someone said that it was an original approach to the subject; I'd be interested to hear if that is truly the case.

[ivan11422]

Nice stories. Funny stuff with Maria, lol.

[ryansgalant]

This one took me a little longer as I wasn't quite satisfied with several aspects of it. All in all though, this one was kind of fun to write, even though it ends at a bit of an odd place; reason being is people have said I need to keep my stories shorter so they have an easier time reading them. Anyhow, without further ado, here's chapter 5....


I almost forgot. For those interested in reading it in text format rather than pdf, go to my DA page as they will all be text format now.

[ryansgalant]

And yet another chapter in this saga. I'm sure this story isn't progressing as fast as most would like, but I'd love to hear some feedback on what it is so far. Enjoy the read!

[ryansgalant]

So I wrote this story a while ago, but haven't had time to edit it until now, due to several funerals that I've attended recently. This story is about a average guy, and a hispanic female cop that get a little to into each other. Both male and female transformation is involved. I tried to make one a little more drawn out than the other, but I'd love to hear your feedback on the story. It called.....

The Darkside of the Moon.

I am currently planning on making it into a longer story that explores the darker side of being a werewolf, including the discovery of the werewolf world that everyone is in denial about.