New writer with a new story!

DazA · 01-30-2013

Hi everyone.

I'm new around here, and I've just written and uploaded my first story attempt here: http://www.overflowingbra.com/results.htm?varname=817

I know it's very short, but it was just an attempt at the whole thing to see if I was any good at it! Any feedback would be great, I'm currently considering what to do next if people like it then I might expand on this base or maybe do something completely different.

I hope you like it!

01-30-2013	#1
DazA Leecher Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 6	New writer with a new story! Hi everyone. I'm new around here, and I've just written and uploaded my first story attempt here: http://www.overflowingbra.com/results.htm?varname=817 I know it's very short, but it was just an attempt at the whole thing to see if I was any good at it! Any feedback would be great, I'm currently considering what to do next if people like it then I might expand on this base or maybe do something completely different. I hope you like it!