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06-18-2007
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Prophet Of Darkness
Join Date: Jun 2005
Location: UK
Posts: 1,792
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Comic Contest - Winners
Ok... I want to take time to write some detailed critiques of all the entries... which will take some time, hopefully done tomorrow.
It's worth saying that most of the entries - though some people seem to think a page compromises an A3 sheet of paper - were in fact, of a good quality. Growth Industry - This story had a lot of heart and it was one of the few scripts that got right down to the BE... and didn't really stop but also managed to relate the characters. Garremont Gaiden - Even if this hadn't been a great script, I'd have made this a winner for the SHEER level of care and attention that was given to all aspects of the comic... characters, descriptions and so on. Amazon Lisa - Well... this one is quite epic (and the one that is currently being illustrated). Even if you don't like Great Dragon's character it's got a great mix of transformation, sexiness and humour. Anyway, I shall put together the full list of critiques... honourable mentions and so on... I'll also have to talk to Matt and find out how many of these comics are lively to be illustrated... so, just because your name isn't on there doesn't mean your script won't be illustrated... it also doesn't mean that you didn't do a fine job... as the extra time it took to judge, it was a real jostle to place. |
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06-18-2007
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Ail-Soft Aficionado
Join Date: Aug 2006
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Bravo to the winners, and thank you for hosting this event, Tenebrae.
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06-18-2007
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Process Disciple
Join Date: May 2005
Posts: 4,920
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Aw.
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06-18-2007
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The Divine Sith Lord
Join Date: Jul 2005
Location: A galaxy far, far away.
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I eagerly await my critique to improve.
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06-19-2007
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Prophet Of Darkness
Join Date: Jun 2005
Location: UK
Posts: 1,792
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It's worth saying that writing plain prose and writing an ACTUAL comic script are very, very different.
Like the script for a play or film, you've got to visualise - or if you're going to do a good job you've got to - the scenes AND the layout of the pages... well, only the more diligent people went that far... I think - if we are to have another - I shall make sure the rules and guidelines are more clearly defined. |
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06-19-2007
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Process Master
Join Date: Aug 2005
Posts: 837
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Well, I tried. Oh well; better luck next time.
Looking forward to the critique. |
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06-20-2007
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Death is Near
Join Date: Oct 2005
Location: Cyprus Creek, ND
Posts: 1,207
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You'd think there would be a deluge of entries for something so much simpler than a story contest.
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06-20-2007
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Prophet Of Darkness
Join Date: Jun 2005
Location: UK
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Simpler? Write me a comic script containing a full, self-contained story in 20 pages and say it's "simpler" Well, 18 entries is pretty good.
Anyway, posting the critiques up soon. |
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06-20-2007
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Prophet Of Darkness
Join Date: Jun 2005
Location: UK
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06-20-2007
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Process Disciple
Join Date: May 2005
Posts: 4,920
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I'd like to hear about mine, if that's okay. I really worked hard on it, and I have another comic idea for the next time this comes around, but I'd like to hear where I went wrong on this one...
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06-21-2007
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DERP
Join Date: Oct 2006
Location: right over there!!!
Posts: 296
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gratz to all the winners!! ^^
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06-21-2007
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Prophet Of Darkness
Join Date: Jun 2005
Location: UK
Posts: 1,792
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I'd gladly send you a personal commentary on your comic Soylent... I'll just have to dig through my e-mails to remind myself which one is yours.
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