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Join Date: Jan 2006
Posts: 11
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Story - Weapon of the Gods
Because it's about time I contributed something. I've tapped out a couple GTS stories in my time, but this is the first one that I ever really finished. It's more of a scene, really, but for things like this I like to keep the narrative compact. But enough of these rambles. Now it is time for words!
********** It wasn't the last thing Miranda Chambers had expected to find in an unearthed ruin, but she imagined that if she made a list the sword would be very close to the end. She wasn't even sure if "sword" was the proper term for it. To her eyes, it had been forged to carve mountains in half. Would you like to know more? Then, by all means, download it! |
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Join Date: Mar 2006
Posts: 147
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Awesome Story. Short and to the point.
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Oops...she did it again.
Join Date: Feb 2007
Location: That little place in your head you don't know about.
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Agreed. Found it very interesting.
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Not bad. Loved the part just before the end.
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Lurker
Join Date: Jan 2006
Posts: 11
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Thanks! I really appreciate commentary like this. It's the sort of thing that drives me to write further stories in this vein. I'm not particularly good with skills of an artist, so this is the best I can offer.
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