Some pretty good Anime gts stories found.

[DarkAce]

As I was surfing threw DA,I found a person named Redacegod350.He has about 10 anime gts stories and there pretty darn good.


Heres the links to each of his stories.
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http://redacegod350.deviantart.com/a...-pt-1-57479603

http://redacegod350.deviantart.com/a...-pt-2-57625934

http://redacegod350.deviantart.com/a...-pt-3-57967877

http://redacegod350.deviantart.com/a...-pt-1-59406397

http://redacegod350.deviantart.com/a...-pt-2-59832131

http://redacegod350.deviantart.com/a...-pt-1-60429929

http://redacegod350.deviantart.com/a...-pt-2-61225545

http://redacegod350.deviantart.com/a...-pt-3-62171515

http://redacegod350.deviantart.com/a...-pt-4-63243446

http://redacegod350.deviantart.com/a...-pt-1-64222071

http://redacegod350.deviantart.com/a...-pt-2-65174717
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He calls it his growing problem series,and I think his next one is going to be a sequel to his may's growing problem one.

[Aarondaretard]

I'm not a fan of stories but this ones pretty good so far.

[Mattariel]

As much as I like new growth work, and this could just be the fact I'm seriously tired right now, but the author really needs to work on his grammar, dialog and overall form in order to really make a cool story.

Perhaps this is a case of a good imagination for growth scenes, but a lack of practical knowledge of storytelling/writing. I'll give them another go when I'm not drifting off every time I blink.

[DarkAce]

So he has a little bad grammer skills,so what.Nobodies perfect.

[Abazaba]

Originally Posted by DarkAce

So he has a little bad grammar skills,so what.Nobodies perfect.

Eh its not the bad grammar thats bothersome. Its more the poor use of proper script style. Dialog should stick OUT a bit from the scene descriptions, it makes it easier to read. Secondly and this could just be me, but the stories don't seem fleshed out enough. They are sort of in between short stories and full stories. In that they have more plot than JUST growth, but not enough story to be considered compleate. Then again, I like a slow story that really does it up with detail not only in the growth, but also in the actual PLOT.

As for spelling and grammar isn't a huge deal. Like people say no ones perfect and not everyone has English as there first language. So that can be over looked, unless it is just unreadable because of poor grammar or spelling. So all and all good effort but could be expanded upon. I look forward to reading the rest of the May story arc.

joeman: i cannot read without propper punctuation i also need quotation marks.

But it is an ok story.

[MadDocofGrowth]

Not bad a bit....Though the script style format is an eye sore,literally. .-.
-5 points

>_>;