Female werewolf TF video (in progress)

NightmareHero · 08-02-2007

http://www.savefile.com/files/939892

I'm thinking on adding a love scene with a male werewolf. If you have any suggestions or comments, list them here.

EDIT: heres the final version - http://www.savefile.com/files/1015033

Cactus Jack · 08-02-2007

That looks oddly familiar...

JaeDy · 08-03-2007

Looks more like a fox, with the tail there. But I like it... which is odd because I usually hate the program.

I think the only problem I had with it was that the whole tf seemed very stop-start... But then again I have no experience with the software so that's just an opinion.

Lizardman · 08-03-2007

The "throbbing" scene went on too long and seemed to be unnecessary. How her chest and groin kept inflating and deflating over and over, this should really be rethought. Also, she's stiff in most areas. Try having the model actually move and react a bit more.

EFBeast · 08-03-2007

I mostly agree with Lizardman. The "pulsating crotch" thing is quite unnecessary and takes, IMHO, waaaay too much screen time. Also, since most of the TF is fundamentally a texture change, the model is too static. Try and add some sort of reaction - not sweeping, ample gestures, just subtle movements.

The feets' TF is nicely done.

CNash · 08-03-2007

NightmareHero, this video is almost a carbon copy of your previous work, "Red Hot Riding Hood", with some textures and movements changed. Her chest didn't "pulsate" in that one, though.

Cactus Jack · 08-03-2007

Quote:

Originally Posted by CNash

NightmareHero, this video is almost a carbon copy of your previous work, "Red Hot Riding Hood", with some textures and movements changed. Her chest didn't "pulsate" in that one, though.

That's where I remember it from.

NightmareHero · 08-04-2007

I'm not done with this yet. I'm thinking about adding a love scene with a male werewolf and some more scenes. But the throbbing stays. That's my favorite part. :-D

Prophet Tenebrae · 08-05-2007

I agree - the throbbing is just... silly. The tail growth is also far too fast and rather too fluffy for a wolf... but it's pretty good.

ZodiacX · 08-05-2007

No offence, but her crotch looked fine in the beginning. Afterwards, you could drive a car in there.

Lyinginbedmon · 08-05-2007

It's better than anything I could do, but that doesn't mean it's great. I agree on the "crotch throbbing", but the "breast fluctuation" is completely over the top.

tums012 · 08-05-2007

would u mind posting a link for this "red hot riding hood" u guys are talking about?

08-02-2007	#1
NightmareHero Lurker Join Date: May 2007 Posts: 29	Female werewolf TF video (in progress) http://www.savefile.com/files/939892 I'm thinking on adding a love scene with a male werewolf. If you have any suggestions or comments, list them here. EDIT: heres the final version - http://www.savefile.com/files/1015033 Last edited by NightmareHero; 08-29-2007 at 11:46 PM. Reason: new link

08-02-2007	#2
Cactus Jack Fan of the Art of Process Join Date: Mar 2007 Posts: 298	That looks oddly familiar... __________________ "Scientists say they've built a better peanut..." - Fox News

08-03-2007	#3
JaeDy ^.^/ The slash is my tail Join Date: Jan 2006 Posts: 215	Looks more like a fox, with the tail there. But I like it... which is odd because I usually hate the program. I think the only problem I had with it was that the whole tf seemed very stop-start... But then again I have no experience with the software so that's just an opinion. __________________ Eeny-Meeny-Miney-Mo, Catch a werewolf by the toe. If it wriggles, let it go, Else... you do not want to know. - JaeDy

08-03-2007	#4
Lizardman Banned Join Date: Jan 2006 Posts: 82	Well... The "throbbing" scene went on too long and seemed to be unnecessary. How her chest and groin kept inflating and deflating over and over, this should really be rethought. Also, she's stiff in most areas. Try having the model actually move and react a bit more.

08-03-2007	#6
CNash What would you rather be? Join Date: Aug 2005 Posts: 714	NightmareHero, this video is almost a carbon copy of your previous work, "Red Hot Riding Hood", with some textures and movements changed. Her chest didn't "pulsate" in that one, though. __________________ "And the Lord said, 'Come forth and receive eternal life.' But John came fifth and won a toaster." Avatar by Geckz

08-03-2007	#5
EFBeast Leecher Join Date: Jan 2006 Posts: 8	I mostly agree with Lizardman. The "pulsating crotch" thing is quite unnecessary and takes, IMHO, waaaay too much screen time. Also, since most of the TF is fundamentally a texture change, the model is too static. Try and add some sort of reaction - not sweeping, ample gestures, just subtle movements. The feets' TF is nicely done.

08-04-2007	#8
NightmareHero Lurker Join Date: May 2007 Posts: 29	I'm not done with this yet. I'm thinking about adding a love scene with a male werewolf and some more scenes. But the throbbing stays. That's my favorite part. :-D

08-05-2007	#9
Prophet Tenebrae Prophet Of Darkness Join Date: Jun 2005 Location: UK Posts: 1,792	I agree - the throbbing is just... silly. The tail growth is also far too fast and rather too fluffy for a wolf... but it's pretty good. __________________ Female Transformation Chat! Female Transformation Uber Blog BE Story Club

08-05-2007	#10
ZodiacX Ninja Ferret! Woosh! Join Date: Jan 2006 Posts: 801	No offence, but her crotch looked fine in the beginning. Afterwards, you could drive a car in there. Last edited by ZodiacX; 08-05-2007 at 06:38 AM.

08-05-2007	#11
Lyinginbedmon Frequent Poster Join Date: Sep 2006 Posts: 115	It's better than anything I could do, but that doesn't mean it's great. I agree on the "crotch throbbing", but the "breast fluctuation" is completely over the top.

08-05-2007	#12
tums012 Leecher Join Date: May 2007 Posts: 3	would u mind posting a link for this "red hot riding hood" u guys are talking about?