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Page 1 (38)
Just to let you all know that I did not trash it or anything.
I am cutting the pages down so that it is easier to read. How does everything look? The text looks good plus I like to highlight some choice words to make it look more exciting. |
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03-04-2006
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Nodoka~<3
Join Date: Sep 2005
Location: Hinamizawa Village
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Whoa! Thats terrific! Now that looks more official and not so sloppy-kindergarden job like me! Great job, I don't see any problems there.
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03-04-2006
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Process Master
Join Date: Jan 2006
Location: Nova Scotia, Canada
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Great job on the text. Easily readable, and no white edges and such in the speech bubbles.
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03-11-2006
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Just a bit of a bump to let everyone know that I am still working on it. I am about half done. Pretty quick, because I really haven't worked on it too much. Does anyone have the cover to the manga? I usually like to include it.
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03-14-2006
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Process Master
Join Date: May 2005
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A Mister Oppai_Seijin from 4chan writes:
"The first series of pictures is from an early chapter of the amazing and awesome manga called "Benten-sama niha iwanaide (Please don't say to the fairy Benten)" by Hirohisa Tsuruta from studio Cocobatt. It's not a hentaimanga, it's young adult one with some ecchi scenes. The artwork is really amazing, so if you're in japan go to the nearest bookoff or similare store and by the complete series (Only 5 vol.)." If Oppai_Seijin is from here, thank you for researching this. |
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04-09-2006
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Gentelman, quite Large
Join Date: Apr 2006
Location: Where the wind is at my back
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AH Bastard!! one of my all time fav anime and mangas. I rember hearing that the creator was a former henti artist. so did he do this before or after he wrote Bastard!!.
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02-24-2007
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Decided this BE manga was definitely one of the best in creation. So it is a Notable Contribution.
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02-28-2007
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Leecher
Join Date: Jan 2007
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Benten sama ni ha i wa nai de
[Goddess of arts, wisdom] Ms. (in) say don't Don't Say to the Goddess moshimoshi onegai ga, kanau nara... hello please asfor, [to make wish] if... If you wish for it, please... Business Jump Hirohisa Tsuruta Studio Cocobatt tagline on the back of each volume: Please don't say to the fairy BENTEN!! The above translation took me way to long to be practical. I can tell you the general arc of the story, but don't expect a literal translation. I'm missing volume #4 of the five volume manga set. Tell me if you want to hear more. |
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03-01-2007
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Death is Near
Join Date: Oct 2005
Location: Cyprus Creek, ND
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An excellent manga, but I just wish you at least saw a nipple. I'm not all for crowding it with sex, but it would be nice to see the organs being expanded.
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12-20-2007
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further translation cleanup
I know reviving old threads tends to anger people around here, but even after Sutibaru's work on the translation, there were still a lot of grammar and usage issues that bugged me, so I took the liberty of cleaning up the English a bit further for my own satisfaction, and felt that I should share it with the board. Any comments/criticism would be welcome.
http://www.megaupload.com/?d=6PCUAIXC |
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12-27-2007
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Cat master.
Join Date: Oct 2006
Location: Portland, OR
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Thats nice
Well, I wouldn't normaly care to say anything, but I checked the download and there's nothing in the zip file. So you might want to try and zip it again and put it back up here.
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Linear Mode
