My short stories - transformation

[geneticks]

Slug/any invertebrate or insect !

And for the txt, just paste the story in notepad, and post the saved txt file as a forum attachment.
You can also create a zip/rar file and put every single story in it.

[Sephie]

I still would love some TG or a Penguin. Or a pig dog. A capatilist pig dog.

[thejakeman]

centuar!
but i won't read it, so don't listen to me.

[tetsumi]

Well, here you go, a new story up. I'm sorry it's been so long in between new stories, but I've recently transitioned from the military, moved, tried to find a job, and started school, all in the last two weeks or so. So, here's the next installment.

It's an insect tf, as was suggested by geneticks. I wouldn't normally do one of these at all, but I looked for some images, and there are some fairly sexy ones out there. Most notably, there is one, I can't remember the name of it, but there is one on Mamabliss's website that is pretty sexy, at least the first few images. So, I tried to put my usual spin on it, and see where it went from there. I'd be really appreciative of any feedback you guys can give, as usual, good or bad, since this is a bit of a departure from what I would normally write about. I'd like to know if I hit it or not.

Also, does everyone prefer that I post stories this way, as an attachment, or would you rather just see the whole thing up at one time? Let me know.

I hope you all enjoy it!

Next up- ? Probably a kangaroo or a centaur. Or maybe a dog. Or a dinosaur. I don't know, whatever. Suggestions are always helpful too.

[geneticks]

Yay ! Thanks for following my idea !
Nice transformation, nice writing !
cool !

[TF-Viewer]

Liked the insect TF.

Ever thought of doing a snake or mouse TF? Maybe both?

[vadrake]

A snake TF would be nice, perhaps betrayal or vengence to avoid the snakebite cliche?

[Mitchell]

I prefer attachments. Can you do your old stuff as one, so I can save it easier?

[tetsumi]

I'm glad it went over well! Sorry it wasn't a slug, geneticks, but I just haven't worked myself up to that yet. Don't know if I'll ever do one of those, but I was happy to indulge you with this in the mean time.

I'm also more than happy to combine the other stuff I've written here for you guys, though I don't know how to put them all into one file, so I've attached them separately. I'm really glad that there's a fanbase for this, even if it's small. I certainly can't stack up to "The Moon Coin", but I'm trying to do a decent job anyway.

I like the suggestion of a snake and a mouse tf, especially together, but I have a few problems. One, without the subject having hands, I don't know how I would really fulfill the "sexual" aspect that some of you may have noticed in my stories. And two, the interesting play of two friends tf'd into predator/prey could only really be played out if they fully tf'd into animals. Which doesn't really go along with the other stuff I've written either. So, what do you propose?

Anyway, like I said, I'm glad there are at least a few people liking these things, and as long as I get comments, I'll continue posting. Oh, and I posted a BE only story over on the BE forum. It's short, but might be worth checking out if you guys want. Thanks always for the feedback, and I hope to have something new posted soon!

[TF-Viewer]

Alrighty, some suggestions for the snake & mouse:

For the "fullfilling the sexual aspect" I assume you mean her "getting herself off" during. I can see her managing this in several ways. One being she realizes she's going to lose her arms and hands and be unable to touch herself soon so she frantically begins to masturbate with her hands before the transformation reaches that point. She may or may not be successful in "beating the clock" on that one, if not she could grind her crotch against something on the ground, the carpet, her own clothes, or even the mouse girl if the TFs are done together. She could tell the mouse girl to stimulate her orally perhaps.

If you don't want to fully TF them but still play out the predator and prey scenario, the mouse girl could shrink to the size of a mouse, but remain humanoid in shape and retain intelligence while the (possibly armless naga) snake girl eyes her hungrily.
(though personally, I've always been a big fan of full animal TFs)

Just off the top of my head. Hope it helps.

[tetsumi]

Thanks for the ideas, TF Viewer, I'll definitely see what I can do. I think my next one will be of a subject of my own choice, but I'll see what I can come up with for the snake and the mouse on the one after that. I like your ideas alot, and I'll definitely give it a shot! It's a pretty big departure for me, going with no arms and all, but it'll be a fun challenge. Now I just have to find the time to write.

There's been some enthusiastic support for my little BE story both on the BE board here, and particularly on my DA page, so I'll have to find time to write another one of those as well. TF is my main thing, though, so you can be sure it'll be my focus first. I really enjoy writing these stories, and I don't know why I never thought to do it before! The support I've gotten on here, and the compliments people have given me have been great, and I'll keep writing as long as there appears to be an audience for it.

Give me a little while to find time to write something else, and if possible I'll have another story up this week. I can't promise anything, but I'll try.

[TF-Viewer]

Glad you liked my ideas.

I look forward to reading your next one. No spoilers please, I want to be surprised.