New Transformation Short-Stories

[tetsumi]

Venus- Yeah, I understand. I guess I just got lazy on that one. That was really meant to be more of a comedic thing, and something I wrote just to keep myself writing. Not that that's an excuse, just explaining why I got a little lazy there.

For some reason, I ended up with both the time and the desire to write another story, less than a week after my last one. I don't think this one came out very well, and I don't think it was as good as the Sea Creature one, but here it is anyway. I put off doing a sequel to the Mary Cat TF for awhile, because I wanted to make sure that when I did it I did it justice. I don't think this really does it justice, but I found it difficult to work with three characters in this situation, and still have them all doing something. It was tough to pace.

Anyway, here you go. If you remember, at the end of the first one Mary's boyfriend is banging on the door wanting to know why she never showed up for their date. In this one, the girls are forced to just show him what happened, and while the discussion is going back and forth, the second girl begins her transformation. Lucky guy just happened to be in the right place at the right time. I hope you guys enjoy it, even if it isn't as good as the first one. As always, C&C is appreciated!


And each time there was a new speaker, a new paragraph was created...

[Nothingman]

Hey tetsumi,

Just wanted to let you know I really enjoy your stories. I can't believe no one has commented on your latest sequel to Mary Cat. Great stuff!

I look forward to seeing some new stories from you someday!

P.S. - How come your Sea Monster story is not on you DA account?

[TF-Viewer]

Originally Posted by Nothingman

Hey tetsumi,

Just wanted to let you know I really enjoy your stories. I can't believe no one has commented on your latest sequel to Mary Cat. Great stuff!

I look forward to seeing some new stories from you someday!

P.S. - How come your Sea Monster story is not on you DA account?

I think it may be on his FA account. http://www.furaffinity.net/user/tetsumi/

[tetsumi]

Yeah, all of my stuff is still over on my FA account. Apparently, someone reported me to DA, and almost all of my stuff was taken down. The few stories that are left are just ones that I haven't bothered to take down myself, yet. I plan to move all my non-porn stuff over to my legitimate DA account that I used for my photography, but all my porn stuff is still available at FA.

[tetsumi]

Hey guys, here's another story for you. It's another cat-tf, which I guess is pretty lame, but oh well. I've been out of writing for a long time, and this is just supposed to get me back into it. It's not nearly my best work, but it was fun to write. A girl working in a lingerie store finds out that one size really does fit all.

I'd love to hear what you all think, and I hope you enjoy it! And damn, I need some new material! Any ideas, shoot them my way. Nothing too specific, but give me a few idea of at least what kind of animal/creature you'd like to see tf'd next.

[TF-Viewer]

I liked it. I thought the ending was a bit silly (world peace by giving women orgasms..? ) but the main thing is you had fun writing it.

[Amahain]

I liked it too. Simple and enjoyable. Keep 'em coming!

[tetsumi]

Yeah, well, I can't think of much that would keep me happier and less focused on killing people! But yeah, I know it was a stretch. I need to find the time and actually sit down and write a story out well. But I'm glad you guys enjoyed this little one, I'll try to have another one up in a shorter amount of time, this time!

[Sephie]

Not really much into tf, but I like your style. Look forward to reading.