New Transformation Short-Stories

[tetsumi]

I don't know where my old thread went, but I'm sure it's still around her somewhere. In any case, I figured it was time to start a new thread. I'm back on here again, and I'm getting started on writing new stories, so I thought I'd just go back to what I did before, and share them as I write them, with anyone here who still enjoys them.

This one is a comedic piece I wrote about a group therapy session for all of the subjects of my past stories. I thought it would be interesting for them to all get together and bitch about the things I make them do, or put them through. Hopefully someone will get a kick out of this, though I admit, you probably have to have read my other stories to really get the jokes here. Still, there is a huge orgy of TF'd sex in this thing, and someone might enjoy that either way.

Hope you guys like it! As always, C&C is appreciated!

[Snikt]

Hot -and- humerous. Glad to see you're writing these again, but I do hope everything at least worked out out for you as well.

[Esquire]

I'd do something similar-and, in fact did, in "Lola"-but given how messed up my chars are, they'd probably end up eating each other.

“right about now is when we always get ca-“

"Caught"?

[tetsumi]

Snikt - Thanks for the compliments. I'm glad you enjoyed the story, I thought it was kind of funny myself, but it's always hard to judge your own work, I find. Alas, no, things did not work out for me. At least, not the way I wanted and hoped. Still, I'm resilient, and things will work out for me, in the end. Thanks for the good wishes, though. They are appreciated.

Esquire - I'll have to take a look through your stories. I have to admit that I'm not very well read in TF literature, and pretty much only know the big names. Even then, not the big names in particularly good stories, but the big names in good porn stories.

In any case...yes, caught. For whatever reason, I always end with my characters either getting caught or facing imminent exposure. I don't really know why I do it. I don't have any desire to humiliate women or anything misogynistic like that. I guess it just seems like it adds an element of tension to the end of the story, rather than just saying, "THE END!!"

[Esquire]

I'm not even close to a big name. Possible a lower-medium name. And given that a good deal of my stories aren't porn, it's no wonder you haven't heard of me.

I, myself, have found myself getting into the habit of having the story end on some kind of callback or joke. See "Bethany feels Horse", for example.

[LostTank]

haha, i liked this story, quite funny and I recognized most of the characters in therapy

[tetsumi]

Esquire, I did read some of your stories, and I think you're a very good writer. I'm actually thinking I might upload some of my non-porn stories, just for anyone who might be interested in them. I'd love to hear what you think of them.

LT, glad you liked it! I'm flattered that you recognized most of the characters in there! I'm hoping to have some time this week to write another one and have it up, but we'll have to see what happens.

[tetsumi]

Well, it took me long enough to get one of these written, but I'm pretty pleased with the result this time. I think this one came out ok, and I think I'm about ready to start tackling some sequels a few of my other stories.

This one is about a woman who discovers a transformative liquid and realizes her lifelong dream of becoming more than she already is. I big 'ol sea creature thing! I don't know why a sea creature would have huge boobs, but who am I to speculate? As always, C&C is appreciated. I love to know what people think! Enjoy!

[venus_redscar]

New Speaker, New Paragraph.

It doesn't matter how short it is.

New Speaker, New Paragraph.

[tetsumi]

I'm guessing you're talking about this section here, since it's the only actual conversation in the piece? --Jennifer turned to Raime, her first mate. “Raime, I will be in my quarters for a few hours. I need to record the details of this last foray, and ensure that when I organize my next expedition we do not cover the same ground.”
“Oui Madame Captain, I will see to it that you are undisturbed.” Raime said with a small bow as Jennifer strode across the deck, heading below to her quarters.
“See that you do, Raime. I want no one bothering me.” she called over her shoulder as she disappeared down the ladderwell. -- Or are you talking about a different story? I definitely tromped all over that rule in the "Group Therapy" story, I know. Sorry if I made it hard/annoying to read. Sometimes I kinda half-ass that stuff thinking that it doesn't matter too much for a little TF porn story, but I gotta knock that off. Writing is writing, after all. Thanks for the slap on the wrist!

[Amahain]

Aside from the blatant violation of the "new speaker, new paragraph rule" (it's important - really), I like your style. It's always nice to see a new story from you.

I also have to say "'grats" on your originality. I can safely say that was the first erotic sea monster transformation story I've ever read.

[venus_redscar]

I was referring to the first story. With that many character, new paragraph new speaker becomes very important.