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11-24-2005
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Process Fan
Join Date: Nov 2005
Posts: 31
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My Last BE Comic
hey people... first: GREAT FORUM... second: for everyone who didn't know me...
I'm Byron, i'm an "poser artist"... so what is it better for know me to see my comic???? tell me what you think about... your ideas, your suggestion, your insults... everything!! Byron |
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11-24-2005
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Crazy Old Brit
Join Date: Oct 2005
Location: United Kingdom
Posts: 1,250
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Very good but annoyingly ended. I'm all for cliffhangers but it seems like it should be longer rather quickly.
Not trying to rush your work mind you but it seems so unfinished. Espically with the ending being in full writing rather than more pictures. Overall its good though. For poser work I'd rate it 8 or 9 out of 10 |
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11-24-2005
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Process Fan
Join Date: Nov 2005
Posts: 31
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well, this comic isn't finish.. it will have a sequence... just give me the time to do that!
thanks for the vote anycase...! Byron |
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11-24-2005
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Crazy Old Brit
Join Date: Oct 2005
Location: United Kingdom
Posts: 1,250
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I thought as much but personally I would of made more of it before realising it. But then again I just want to see the end (After seeing the start I must see the end be that BE or Movie)
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11-24-2005
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Well the story was engaging enough for me to get over the male nudity; so good job, keep it up.
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11-25-2005
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Fetish Artist
Join Date: Jul 2005
Location: Eletania,Planet at War
Posts: 463
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i read through the whole thing, so its all good to me
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11-25-2005
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Prophet Of Darkness
Join Date: Jun 2005
Location: UK
Posts: 1,792
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Good work Byron.
I liked the way you improved her looks. She was definitely looking mighty fine by the end. |
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11-25-2005
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Process Master
Join Date: Jun 2005
Posts: 556
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not bad! what did you use to composite the diffrent j-pegs together to make the comic.. Id like to try something along these lines but dont know how to go about bringing them together to form a comic page..regards
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11-25-2005
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Process Fan
Join Date: Nov 2005
Posts: 31
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for Prinz... for edit all my poser work i usually used Paint Shop Pro 8 (by Jasc), but u could use Photoshop (by Adobe)... and there are the vector lines for divide the pics...
thank for all your post and your suggestion u did and for regard u i post the 6th and 7th page!!! Byron Last edited by Byron Production; 11-25-2005 at 09:50 AM. |
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11-25-2005
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Oh dear, not again!
Join Date: Jul 2005
Location: I'm standing right behind you!!
Posts: 2,158
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Hey, this is some work and I love it. Why not make them grow more, into giantess. so they can play with him. Suggest to put it in the gts section though...
Just a freindly suggestion. |
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11-25-2005
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Just round here
Join Date: Sep 2005
Location: Somewhere
Posts: 63
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I`d say boost the breast sizes up a few more notches if possible.
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11-25-2005
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Crazy Old Brit
Join Date: Oct 2005
Location: United Kingdom
Posts: 1,250
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This story is looking more and more like "Wishful Thinking" By Bust Artist (Still on his site might I add)
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