Young Charming Sweetie Julie Fox Girl [TF] By Michael Wolfskin

[mikewolfskin]

I write a story called System Outcast, with in the pages a few people go throw transformations into a half fox people called Nazons.

Julie is one of those people who is turned a fox girl. Sorry no process. Some time later on I'd like do it using Image Ready.

Moreover part of the reason I did not animated the process was because it also involves Age Regression and Transformation. This picture is the reborn growing up Nazon Julie at her youthful age after the Foxy TF.

The process is a rebirth magic returning individuals backwards in age and transforming them into half fox Nazons. They then grow up begin member of that race with no memories of there past life.

The reason behind doing this was to help a dieing race the Nazons from not excising, as well as curing people of life shattering diseases.

Put a tone of hard work into this picture fill its my best work to date, love the way the cute adorable face came out. Took about a week of work to complete her alone then the backdrop took up a whole week also.

Deviant

[CNash]

Nice idea, but I've always objected to "the transformed people lose their memories of who they were" - you're essentially killing the previous character and replacing them with a brand new one, stopping character development dead in its tracks.

[TB Tabby]

Originally Posted by CNash

Nice idea, but I've always objected to "the transformed people lose their memories of who they were" - you're essentially killing the previous character and replacing them with a brand new one, stopping character development dead in its tracks.

Amen to that. What's the point in the transformation if she doesn't even know she's transformed?

[transformative]

while runing the risk of being attacked i personaly hapen 2 LOVE mental transformations, and thats my opinnion.

[EToaster]

I like mental changes, but favor more subtle mental suggestions rather than them becoming an entirely new person.

[mikewolfskin]

The mental memories where forgotten in the process, because there’s a very rich complex storyline involved here. Long story as short as possible……….


Basically Julies history begins as a normal adult human Scientist in a different dimension who falls in love with an individual who goes by the name Don.

Don is a Cyborg who lives in a world where his people created them and fearfully are jailing everyone later on, on the planet Dravons moon.

Two prisoners trying escaping and nearly die. The two become one soul because of Nanotechnology, transforming into a duel personality character, who calls him self Duke Don Deoblus.

Don falls in love Julie who saves his life many times, and is the only person holding his insanity together.

By the end of the first story called Cybernetica she dies and Don is left craving revenge for her death, and racist cruelty over the manner his people where treated.

Don destroys the evil government dictator. The government’s ultimate project for creating a deviance to teleport them to a god dimension, where the eternal destiny gods live, fells in turn getting damaged by Don.

However the deviance sends him to a different dimension of his own world only in a much early time frame. The moon in his world is teleported to this world along with him, which now revolved around it’s self in a early time zone as if it where twin moons. One red begin old and one blue being young in life still.

Don comes to find out about a race making human cloned projects called ultimate life forms and goes to destroy this abomination in his eyes.

Only he finds Julie from this world among the felled projects. The felled projects where made to cure people randomly at a massive levels but had some faults down the line basically.

Julie only knows a short life in this world of getting created, and experimented on then throw aside like trash.

Don comes to find she’s dieing because she’s a felled project, and can’t pair with losing here again. In turn he makes a deal with local race called the Nazons to save her life and get revenge using her later down the line.

She grows up much happier with Don as a mentor at her side, and finally falls in love again much later on. Don does not age anymore because of Nanotechnology. They both sadly walk a path of becoming evil for what they hated people for doing to them. They’re Evil in the ending storyline they show up in called System Outcast.

Also the reason why the transformation happens this way is not just the rich complex storyline but because I was writing this long before I was a fan of Age Regression, or Transformation forums. The storyline comes first after all.

Also I personally like showing off treats that the person may have had in there past life as they grow up. However I understand where you’re coming from. I should show off my Fire Fox story the transformation, doesn’t involve Age Regression, or memories loss.

So long story short the chronicles depends on her going down that path. Moreover she only know a life of begin hated and does not even recall who Don is because it’s her from a different world and time frame, so personally I felt rebirth was the only answer.

And yes that was really the short version believe me.

(Also if anything is spelled wrong its for a reason that I can't help, I did the best I can be nice thanks ahead of time)

[CNash]

Originally Posted by mikewolfskin

So long story short the chronicles depends on her going down that path. Moreover she only know a life of begin hated and does not even recall who Don is because it?s her from a different world and time frame, so personally I felt rebirth was the only answer.

So instead of having your character work through her tragic past and learn to live with it or at least accept it, you just wipe her mind as if it never happened? Since she doesn't remember it now that she's transformed, and presumably nobody's going to mention it to her, the underlying plot point now serves no purpose for her as a character. Trust me, it would be more dramatic if she had to contrast being saved via TF into a foxgirl with the memories of her tragic past. I'll stop there before I start rewriting your characters in my head, and move on.

The point you make about this not being the same Julie that Don knew is a well-used literary device - a character from one parallel world goes to another and finds that world's version of his dead beloved, whom he feels responsible for even though he really shouldn't because it's not the same person. I can see how TFing her physically would help him differentiate the two in his mind (although less so if she just looks the same, only younger with fox ears and tail), but mentally, this doesn't make a difference. You go from having an alternate Julie who doesn't know who Don is, to an alternate Julie who still doesn't know who Don is. A mindwipe doesn't change the situation from either character's point of view.

[mikewolfskin]

I should show off the Fire Fox story, which involves a foxgirl transformation with no Age Regression or memory loss. Sounds like that’s your cup of tea.


Truthfully the character development revolves around Julie as a Nazon foxgirl, who begins to research her strange powers awaking. The whole story concept is about placing the reader in her shoes, so they understand how she fills, as she searches for answers reveling the past she’s forgotten. Basely this story concept makes for an interesting read, because you have to have mystery and chaos to involve reader’s interest in thrillers.

The personality of a characters treats cannot be deleted because it’s bound by someones DNA make up. Some new personality will bloom given the right experiences, where it may have laid dormant before hand.

In addition the Julie from the other world, isn’t impotent to foxgirl Julies Taylor's character development.

Fundamentally it serves two purposes. The first begin Scientist Julies only importance is the character development of Don; sense he is the main character in Cybernetica.

Essentially the past of Don involves the readers understanding of how the good person becomes the evil person, and why. Julie is just one of the many reasons behind that, so She serves as the link in truth, nothing more in this realm.

The second reason involves the real Julie begin a cloned project with no memories, behind why she has strange powers awaiting later down her life. All of which involve her character development at a later time.

Truth is she is the same soul from different world with many simulates, and even though its not Don's lovers he is going insane, doesn't care, and takes the chances to get revenge on evil people by forcing them to understand his way, as well remaking this Julie in the likeingness of the other.

Anyways if give the choice to just live with it, and die a early death in life, with nothing but biter memories, or be reborn a new fresh life; would you make the choice to forget and live on in hope of better memories? Or would just make the choice to die unhappy?

(Moreover, don’t think of anything I am saying as rude, I am just enjoying the conversation.) Anyways hope you still enjoyed the art.

[CNash]

Personally, if given the choice, I would keep my memories. BTW, you seem to be suggesting that there are only two options - keep memories and die, or lose them and live as a Nazon - what happened to keeping the memories and living as a Nazon?

I'm not criticising the age regression, or the art (which is good) - I simply believe that a person is the sum of their memories and experiences, and that denying a person their memories dimishes them as a whole. Also consider: you say that one alternative is to live, and hope for better memories - after the memory wipe, she won't have the memories of that hope.

Too much use o' the gradient tool...

[mikewolfskin]

Originally Posted by long john silver

Too much use o' the gradient tool...

This might sound rude but the world doesn’t live in black and white little bland one-toned colors anymore. The gradient tool is just that a tool built to add flavor and variety of colors. Keep in mind giving Critiques involve saying something positive along with the negative my friend.

Example the white hair has a slit gray tone adding flavor and flair to the picture. Personally I think some of you just don't like the gradient tool all together. Moreover I'm not going to allow my picture to look plain in colors like a 8-Bit Mario from 20 years ago. Sorry Nintendo I still love you Anyways with out the silent gray tone the colors is over power alone.

Originally Posted by CNash

I'm not criticising the age regression, or the art (which is good) - I simply believe that a person is the sum of their memories and experiences, and that denying a person their memories diminishes them as a whole. Also consider: you say that one alternative is to live, and hope for better memories - after the memory wipe, she won't have the memories of that hope.

That's fine lets just agree to disagree, as I've always believed a persons personality is blood and soul deep. For me the option wound bore the reader in truth. She regains a large sum of the memories later down the line anyways.

Glad your liking the the picture on the other hand, I'll maybe do Mikae the foxgirl next.

Originally Posted by mikewolfskin

This might sound rude but the world doesn?t live in black and white little bland one-toned colors anymore. The gradient tool is just that a tool built to add flavor and variety of colors. Keep in mind giving Critiques involve saying something positive along with the negative my friend.

Example the white hair has a slit gray tone adding flavor and flair to the picture. Personally I think some of you just don't like the gradient tool all together. Moreover I'm not going to allow my picture to look plain in colors like a 8-Bit Mario from 20 years ago. Sorry Nintendo I still love you Anyways with out the silent gray tone the colors is over power alone.

Then why don't ye be takin' the intelligent method and be usin' SHADIN' instead o' freakin' gradients like a pretentious land-lubber.