Other Rabukurafuto muscle expansion stories

[Rabukurafuto]

Other, incomplete and unlikely to ever be worked on again stories involving muscle growth.

Sekishoku no Miel!: A Konjiki no Gash! (Zatch Bell! in most overseas releases) fan fiction about a girl named Miel with the power to grow her muscles (but not her chest, much to her annoyance).

"Miel, Part 1" and "Miel, Part 2": A Pretty Soldier Sailor Moon fan fiction meant to follow the fan fiction of Iczerman. Another version of Miel from the story above appeared here. Includes breast expansion and lactation in addition to muscle expansion.

Muscles of the Outer Solar System: Another, more successful attempt to continue Iczerman's stories. This focuses on the Soldiers of the Outer Solar System. A new evil force threatens Juuban District, and the Sailor Soldiers transform into more powerful forms to fight back.

Those are all the other muscle expansion-related stories I have written for now.

[Lock]

Ya know, it sucks that these fics weren't continued...I'd love to see more Sailor Moon FMG!

[j2k]

Yeah, the ones related to Iczerman's works should really deserve to be continued.

[Rabukurafuto]

Originally Posted by Lock

Ya know, it sucks that these fics weren't continued...I'd love to see more Sailor Moon FMG!

Originally Posted by j2k

Yeah, the ones related to Iczerman's works should really deserve to be continued.

Ah, about those. I stopped writing at first since I felt I should not write stories that required people to read someone's fan fiction in addition to the canon. Then I had a break-down over how I started seeing people only wanting stories for series they were nostalgic for, and I have strange problems with nostalgia. So I said "No more Sailor Moon stories!" and then worked with newer series or original stories.

I feel bad about that now though, but I prefer my original muscle expansion stories to the Sailor Moon ones. I still sometimes want to try continuing Iczerman's stories, but he seemed to not like the ones I did make.

[j2k]

Originally Posted by Rabukurafuto

I still sometimes want to try continuing Iczerman's stories, but he seemed to not like the ones I did make.

Really? That's a pity.

Mainly because he's not such a great writer himself. He's good, and I certainly loved the FMG scenes he had written, but he can't really "define the main shape and goals" of a long story (I hope you get what I mean). He lumped together all the characters and environments he liked in a single world, mixing the Sailors with Batman, Superman, Slayers and many more, loosing consistency in his path. He also sticked to the misnamed characters of the censored US edition of Sailor Moon.
Of course, I can't absolutely deny that he had been an inspiration for most of the FMG artists since I'm fan of his arts myself.

[Rabukurafuto]

Yes, Iczerman was a big inspiration for me too with his gentle, heroic beauties, but he is too uptight; any fetish other than muscles and breasts seems to be too much for him. Sex outside of marriage can be too much for him. I don't fault him too much for using the English dub Sailor Moon terms though; that was all he had to work with for years. But he also randomly used Japanese terms (and spelled them incorrectly, like "Sailor Senchi") and other times simply had the information wrong (saying Ami and Shingo visited a cave where "Tiger Eye" tried to steal Shingo's dream when it was really Ami's Dream Mirror Tiger's Eye looked into). I did kind of like all the cross-overs Iczerman did since I enjoyed most of what he enjoyed, but he had the most cross-overs with Gold Digger, an American comic series I know next to nothing about. I thought he might have been working toward an overarching plot, but when I asked him he said he was just making it all up as he went along.

I think a big problem Iczerman had though was that he made Ami so strong that almost nothing threatened her. He tried to reverse this in one of his last stories, but it was rather too late.

[Lock]

Well, at LEAST create Sailor Moon FMG stories not related to the Iczerman stories.

[Rabukurafuto]

I might, someday.

[Lock]

Oh well..Everyone makes mistakes. And I'll admit, his FMG scenes could've been more descriptive..But, that's just me. And I do think you should write a Sailor Moon FMG story unrelated to Iczerman's stuff.

[Rabukurafuto]

I would rather work with a different series now.

[j2k]

Originally Posted by Rabukurafuto

I would rather work with a different series now.

Have you ever thought about "Shoujo Kakumei Utena, La Fillette Revolutionaire"? I think it has all the elements that can interest you. And it's noble enough.

[Rabukurafuto]

It's strange; I was thinking of Utena yesterday. I need learn more though because I only read I think one volume and never saw the television version. Utena and Anthy with muscles sounds delightful though.