Blackvioxx's Junkheap

[Black_vioxx]

Heya Guys. Just wanted to let you know that I've begun drawing a good bit and I recently drew one of my first expansion pictures and posted it up on Deviant Art. Hopefully, I'll be posting all my work here also.

I know it's a first attempt at larger B.E. For me, but I'd like to hear comments and constructive criticism. My proportions and anatomy suck at an epic level, I know.

[SoylentOrange]

My comment is to crop all the whitespace off the top of your pic and center it better. No reason for her to be under five inches of nothing, is there? ^^;

[Ryu_Knight]

ditto, as my art teacher used to say "all of that white space is wasted space, either get rid of it or use it"

also looks like a first time with a tablet, I'm not any better but it looks like a pretty good job of it, I think if you cleaned up your lines more you could pull of a pro-look

[Bareon]

Well.. since you already know about the anatomy problems.. let's try... altering that Jock Strap a bit. >.<;;

If you really want criticism about the image then.. uh.. okay.. lets see..

The hands are in a rather awkward position in the middle, which would only be possible if her arms had two elbows, try waving your own arms around in front of a mirror and pretend those breasts are in your way, and you'll quickly see what I mean. Hands would be more realistically placed near the top, the sides or the bottom because of the way they can twist.

The waist is a bit narrow from the hips, and could do with a bit more transition, as in instead of a sharp corner there, you could ramp it gradually inward.

Feet and hands are just plain awkward to draw, unless you trace images of shoes or hands in many positions. A mini art mannequin does wonders for this, but not many people want to lug one around. (no I don't have one and hence my feet and hands still kinda suck when I draw em)