Billie's Wish (Offsite)

[On-Na]

Hey there TG lovers, thanks for the warm reception given for my last post, It has been pretty fun drawing TG so I thought Id start a small comic series called Billies wish, want to know why it is called Billies wish click on the link and see.

Billies Wish pt.01
http://on-na.deviantart.com/gallery/33147750#/d4ci4t6



Will post the next pages and so on, on this thread stay tuned.

[blackshirtboy]

Amazing use of colour, as well as some pretty nice alternate renderings of billy and mandy. The process as well was very well done.

[Reif]

Wow, that was excellent. I would put you right up there with Smooch in terms of sequence quality. I especially like your emphasis on the eyes and face, two areas that I often notice that artists will de-emphasize in favor of BOOBS! and HIPS! please keep it up. Also I'm really enjoying how you manage to make your girls believably, wonderfully understated, yet believably feminine as opposed to the often heavier handed approach of slapping E cup and up breasts on the resulting woman.

What little fault I could pick at would simply be the rather simplistic and cliche things Billy says. I can't count how many times I've seen the "It's gone!" anvil dropped. Given the character I think an implicit statement would be more powerful and less basic maybe something like "Is this a?! Am I a g..g..?!!"

[roycet000]

Great Sequence! Looking forward to seeing more in the future!

[On-Na]

Originally Posted by Reif

What little fault I could pick at would simply be the rather simplistic and cliche things Billy says. I can't count how many times I've seen the "It's gone!" anvil dropped. Given the character I think an implicit statement would be more powerful and less basic maybe something like "Is this a?! Am I a g..g..?!!"

Yes you are right I could spice up the dialogue an easy fix.

[riderkid]

somehow i think the personalities are gonna collide...into female insano

[On-Na]

Originally Posted by riderkid

somehow i think the personalities are gonna collide...into female insano

You hit the nail on the head, he still has his own personality but it has been twisted into Mandie's so he/she will behave differently to the original a Mandy which understands Billies way of thinking.

[riderkid]

Originally Posted by On-Na

You hit the nail on the head, he still has his own personality but it has been twisted into Mandie's so he/she will behave differently to the original a Mandy which understands Billies way of thinking.

still...hearing bildy yell SCIENCE would be fun.

[Adakimel]

Noice!

[P F]

Something I've noticed is characters in these sequences tend to look more attractive somewhere in the middle of the sequence. It certainly holds true here

[transformative]

got'a say, that is some nice work you've done there

[Raijin]

Wow love the style you used, Grim Adventures of Billy and Mandy were one of my favorite cartoons.