In need chapter 2

bagman1 · 10-15-2010

Sorry didint feel like searching for old topic.

So i finnaly got around to writing the actual story, so please check it out here

http://www.furaffinity.net/view/4637943/

Feedback is appreciated also be warned this story is very adult.

ivan11422 · 10-15-2010

THere is nothing in the link right now

bagman1 · 10-16-2010

Are you a member of that site?

TF-Viewer · 10-16-2010

Me likes it. Well except for that part with the dying. Otherwise pretty good stuff.

bagman1 · 10-19-2010

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Originally Posted by TF-Viewer

Me likes it. Well except for that part with the dying. Otherwise pretty good stuff.

Yeah that was an idea i had last min, i honestly didint like it either, but i wanted to shift a focus to Susan as a main character, and it seemed if i kept Jill around there would be of a need to focus on her.

bagman1 · 02-12-2011

Just a note, (sorry for the double post and digging up old topic) chapter 3 is out http://www.furaffinity.net/view/5249055/

10-15-2010	#1
bagman1 Process Fan Join Date: May 2007 Posts: 34	In need chapter 2 Sorry didint feel like searching for old topic. So i finnaly got around to writing the actual story, so please check it out here http://www.furaffinity.net/view/4637943/ Feedback is appreciated also be warned this story is very adult.

10-15-2010	#2
ivan11422 Process Disciple Join Date: May 2006 Posts: 1,144	Re: In need chapter 2 THere is nothing in the link right now

10-16-2010	#3
bagman1 Process Fan Join Date: May 2007 Posts: 34	Re: In need chapter 2 Are you a member of that site?

10-16-2010	#4
TF-Viewer Slave to the Process Forum Join Date: May 2005 Posts: 12,782	Re: In need chapter 2 Me likes it. Well except for that part with the dying. Otherwise pretty good stuff.

02-12-2011	#6
bagman1 Process Fan Join Date: May 2007 Posts: 34	Re: In need chapter 2 Just a note, (sorry for the double post and digging up old topic) chapter 3 is out http://www.furaffinity.net/view/5249055/