Blackvioxx's Junkheap

Black_vioxx · 03-23-2011

Heya Guys. Just wanted to let you know that I've begun drawing a good bit and I recently drew one of my first expansion pictures and posted it up on Deviant Art. Hopefully, I'll be posting all my work here also.

I know it's a first attempt at larger B.E. For me, but I'd like to hear comments and constructive criticism. My proportions and anatomy suck at an epic level, I know.

SoylentOrange · 03-23-2011

My comment is to crop all the whitespace off the top of your pic and center it better. No reason for her to be under five inches of nothing, is there? ^^;

Ryu_Knight · 03-23-2011

ditto, as my art teacher used to say "all of that white space is wasted space, either get rid of it or use it"

also looks like a first time with a tablet, I'm not any better but it looks like a pretty good job of it, I think if you cleaned up your lines more you could pull of a pro-look

Bareon · 03-23-2011

Well.. since you already know about the anatomy problems.. let's try... altering that Jock Strap a bit. >.<;;

If you really want criticism about the image then.. uh.. okay.. lets see..

The hands are in a rather awkward position in the middle, which would only be possible if her arms had two elbows, try waving your own arms around in front of a mirror and pretend those breasts are in your way, and you'll quickly see what I mean. Hands would be more realistically placed near the top, the sides or the bottom because of the way they can twist.

The waist is a bit narrow from the hips, and could do with a bit more transition, as in instead of a sharp corner there, you could ramp it gradually inward.

Feet and hands are just plain awkward to draw, unless you trace images of shoes or hands in many positions. A mini art mannequin does wonders for this, but not many people want to lug one around. (no I don't have one and hence my feet and hands still kinda suck when I draw em)

03-23-2011	#2
SoylentOrange Process Disciple Join Date: May 2005 Posts: 4,920	Re: Blackvioxx's Junkheap My comment is to crop all the whitespace off the top of your pic and center it better. No reason for her to be under five inches of nothing, is there? ^^; __________________ NEW!My Picarto, writing commissions and requestsNEW! NEW!My Twitch.tv channel, watch me game and chatNEW! "Everything Juggalos" Patreon! Exclusive hourglass-expansion content! Erotic Editing Services- your stories, better, for cheap! My Tumblr My DeviantArt

03-23-2011	#3
Ryu_Knight Chop, Chop, Chop, Chop Join Date: Jul 2007 Posts: 547	Re: Blackvioxx's Junkheap ditto, as my art teacher used to say "all of that white space is wasted space, either get rid of it or use it" also looks like a first time with a tablet, I'm not any better but it looks like a pretty good job of it, I think if you cleaned up your lines more you could pull of a pro-look __________________

03-23-2011	#4
Bareon I'm not excited. Join Date: Apr 2006 Location: Viewing the stars of the future. Posts: 944	Re: Blackvioxx's Junkheap Well.. since you already know about the anatomy problems.. let's try... altering that Jock Strap a bit. >.<;; If you really want criticism about the image then.. uh.. okay.. lets see.. The hands are in a rather awkward position in the middle, which would only be possible if her arms had two elbows, try waving your own arms around in front of a mirror and pretend those breasts are in your way, and you'll quickly see what I mean. Hands would be more realistically placed near the top, the sides or the bottom because of the way they can twist. The waist is a bit narrow from the hips, and could do with a bit more transition, as in instead of a sharp corner there, you could ramp it gradually inward. Feet and hands are just plain awkward to draw, unless you trace images of shoes or hands in many positions. A mini art mannequin does wonders for this, but not many people want to lug one around. (no I don't have one and hence my feet and hands still kinda suck when I draw em)