Looking for story feedback

TempleOfHephaestus · 01-29-2012

Story's are gone so...

vended · 01-29-2012

-The girl to horse was really good, A mix of voluntary change and trapped as an animal fate, Nothing very original, but it was well written and I liked it.
The only things bothering me would be the woman talking of the nobel prize like it's a nebulous unknow thing (I almost thought she was mocking her) and the pregnancy as a permanent fix not being cited way before. It would maybe have been a more powerfull ending if it was more clear how little time she had to resist her animals instincts to breeding before the transformation's reversal.

-The girl to various TF was the most original of the three, it was nicely put and the accepted change was well played. It could easily be expanded and as for me I would like to read more of it.

-The Girls to cat was pretty pointless imao, a kind of stupid script, with quite unrealistics reactions from the girls, I guess catgirls lovers would appreciate it more than me.

All three stories were very well written, and I sure wouldn't mind seing more of your writtings in the future.

TempleOfHephaestus · 01-29-2012

Story's offline. Sorry!

01-29-2012	#1
TempleOfHephaestus Leecher Join Date: Jan 2012 Posts: 4	Looking for story feedback Story's are gone so... Last edited by TempleOfHephaestus; 03-12-2017 at 12:18 PM.

01-29-2012	#2
vended Frequent Poster Join Date: Jan 2006 Posts: 302	Re: Looking for story feedback -The girl to horse was really good, A mix of voluntary change and trapped as an animal fate, Nothing very original, but it was well written and I liked it. The only things bothering me would be the woman talking of the nobel prize like it's a nebulous unknow thing (I almost thought she was mocking her) and the pregnancy as a permanent fix not being cited way before. It would maybe have been a more powerfull ending if it was more clear how little time she had to resist her animals instincts to breeding before the transformation's reversal. -The girl to various TF was the most original of the three, it was nicely put and the accepted change was well played. It could easily be expanded and as for me I would like to read more of it. -The Girls to cat was pretty pointless imao, a kind of stupid script, with quite unrealistics reactions from the girls, I guess catgirls lovers would appreciate it more than me. All three stories were very well written, and I sure wouldn't mind seing more of your writtings in the future. Last edited by vended; 01-29-2012 at 11:15 AM.

01-29-2012	#3
TempleOfHephaestus Leecher Join Date: Jan 2012 Posts: 4	Re: Looking for story feedback Story's offline. Sorry! Last edited by TempleOfHephaestus; 03-12-2017 at 12:18 PM.