Feedback on Seventh Chapter of Changing and Growing in Las Vegas

[Cu Roi]

Tis your humble narrator, malenkaya, wondering if I could get some feedback on the most recent chapter of CGLV. I was asked a while back to wrap up the story -- I'm assuming with at least the knowledge and hopefully consent of Great Dragon AD-- in BESC's move to finish up their open stories. I haven't seen the finished product, and I'm aware I didn't add as many character inserts as probably would have been desired. The story, at least as far as my involvement with it is concerned, is finished so this isn't a thread for suggestions, just gauging how interested/angered people were by it.

[GreatDragon AD]

Wait, did I miss something here? You were asked to continue CGLV?

[Cu Roi]

There in lies the issue. Not to air personal laundry, but I had assumed you had signed off on me wrapping up the series. My sincerest apologies, assuming makes an ass out of you and me....although apparently more just me.

[GreatDragon AD]

It's not your fault. The reason I'm concerned is that nobody has informed me about this before work took place. I might Have to look further into this.

[Metatron]

For me it was ok
Little short but ok.
At least you had BE in the comic unlike some other comics posted that I could name.

[Cu Roi]

I imagine you didn't mean physically short, ha ha ha. Maybe you could go into more details on that? Did it feel like i squandered page space?

[emj]

while i enjoyed it, i felt that it was wrong to bring in a new write without even saying anything to the old. for all we know GDAD has/had a totally different direction he wanted to take the story and now we may never know what that vision was.