Merger: No Taxation Without Transformation (Female Griffin TF)

[Obsidian Reaver]

Hey all, another day another story.

Set in the Merger series, this is just a little off-shoot I decided to embark on. It really holds no connection to the main plot, and is just meant to be a stand-alone tale in a familiar universe.

By the way, the title states that this is a griffin tf, and that's still true. It's just I decided to make them just a little different in the world of Daethion.

I hope you like it, and please let me know what you think (positive or negative, either way).

Transformation porn ftw! lol

Enjoy!

PS: Attached also are some reference pics I used when writing this story. They're not mine, and I hold no claim to them.

[frice2000]

Well this was nice porn...But I can never help but wonder with stories in your universe what happens a bit later. After the pleasure of these transformations wears off. I always wish there was another three or four pages where they regain some of there faculties and wonder about their new forms and what has been forced upon them. All that said was a nice transformation. Thanks for sharing.

[Obsidian Reaver]

Originally Posted by frice2000

Well this was nice porn...

Why thank you. See, didn't I tell ya? lol

But I can never help but wonder with stories in your universe what happens a bit later. After the pleasure of these transformations wears off. I always wish there was another three or four pages where they regain some of there faculties and wonder about their new forms and what has been forced upon them. All that said was a nice transformation. Thanks for sharing.

True. My stories do tend to end right after the transformation has generally finished. Just the way I write. I like to end with a bit of suspense and mystery. That can be annoying or jarring to some, and for that I apologize.

Thanks for reading nonetheless!

[frice2000]

Originally Posted by Obsidian Reaver

I like to end with a bit of suspense and mystery.

I guess it's because while the transformation does interest me, hence you know member on this forum, I also really like reading about characters dealing with the post transformation. There's so much to that too. And each of your stories since you change them mentally sometimes, or sometimes not at all mentally there seems to be a rather big story to having to deal with their new forms. Lots could be told from that perspective.

[hexen]

I like it, quite to the point... although a tyrant will never have a thriving kingdom if he or she keeps turning their productive citizens into cattle... but I can see Quen Moonwoe's point of view, she can be convincing. I am seriously looking forward for the massive crossover you set your stories into.
Also, as far as I got it the gryphon is more of a dragon/lion mix instead of the usual lion/eagle? Couldn't quite get much of the creature's look.

[Obsidian Reaver]

Originally Posted by hexen

I like it, quite to the point... although a tyrant will never have a thriving kingdom if he or she keeps turning their productive citizens into cattle... but I can see Quen Moonwoe's point of view, she can be convincing. I am seriously looking forward for the massive crossover you set your stories into.
Also, as far as I got it the gryphon is more of a dragon/lion mix instead of the usual lion/eagle? Couldn't quite get much of the creature's look.

Glad you liked it. Ya know, I'd never considered the implications to a population being subjected to regular TF's. I suppose it may indeed hurt productivity a bit. lol

Sorry about the lack of detail on the griffin. This one's more of a wolf-dragon hybrid. Probably should have tried to highlight that in greater detail.

Originally Posted by frice2000

I guess it's because while the transformation does interest me, hence you know member on this forum, I also really like reading about characters dealing with the post transformation. There's so much to that too. And each of your stories since you change them mentally sometimes, or sometimes not at all mentally there seems to be a rather big story to having to deal with their new forms. Lots could be told from that perspective.

I see your point. I've just never really had the incentive to delve into the victims mind post-TF, generally because it never really furthers my plots. I DO try to give hints, however, through body language (such as a resigned sigh, a baleful glare, ect). Maybe I'll give it a try the next time around.

Originally Posted by TF-Viewer

That was hot.

Thanks. My main goal is to delight!

[TF-Viewer]

That was hot.