New writer with a new story!

[DazA]

Hi everyone.

I'm new around here, and I've just written and uploaded my first story attempt here: http://www.overflowingbra.com/results.htm?varname=817

I know it's very short, but it was just an attempt at the whole thing to see if I was any good at it! Any feedback would be great, I'm currently considering what to do next if people like it then I might expand on this base or maybe do something completely different.

I hope you like it!

[Mr GorpThorp]

This reminded me of another short Titled "Denise". Sadly the author name isn't present on the TXT file so I can't refer you to it.

I liked your writing. The process was faster than I like, but your quality was good. Keep it up ^.^

[DazA]

Thanks, I'm glad you liked it!
I think it's all a bit quick because of the length of the story, so hopefully that will improve when something a bit longer comes along. I'm currently deciding whether to extend this story or start something completely new, so all the feedback is great in helping me out.

Shame there's no author for that other story though.

[somnium]

How long did it take for them to post your story? I submitted one of my stories to The Overflowing Bra last year and I'm still waiting to see it up there.

[PyroWildcat]

Originally Posted by somnium

How long did it take for them to post your story? I submitted one of my stories to The Overflowing Bra last year and I'm still waiting to see it up there.

Are you sure you submitted it correctly? It should be instantaneous.

[DazA]

Yeah, mine went up there straight away when I posted it.

[wardefiant1]

Pretty good story. I look forward to your future tales

[DazA]

Thanks! Glad you liked it. I'm planning on expanding from this story cause I think there's plenty of places to go with it. And of course, more growth!