Need Some Feedback

[civis-rasa]

I'm not sure if this is the best place to ask, but I'm trying to get a feel for photo-morphing (for my art project) and I could use some feedback if anyone is interested.

http://fav.me/d6ld9zb

Thanks,
Civis-Rasa

[Kantomaster1111]

Good stuff! What animals do you plan to do next? How far does the morphing go? Just the face/hands?

Don't forget tails!

[civis-rasa]

Originally Posted by Kantomaster1111

Good stuff! What animals do you plan to do next? How far does the morphing go? Just the face/hands?

Don't forget tails!

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Thanks, I appreciate the feedback! Is there anything else you like? This is my first real try, but I plan on expanding out to a wolf, cat, cow, donkey, and perhaps a horse or fox. I plan on trying fur and tails next.

[Kantomaster1111]

Originally Posted by civis-rasa

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Thanks, I appreciate the feedback! Is there anything else you like? This is my first real try, but I plan on expanding out to a wolf, cat, cow, donkey, and perhaps a horse or fox. I plan on trying fur and tails next.

Sounds like you're moving in the right direction with fur and tails! I personally like to see transformed women but if you're planning males as well just make sure either the cat, fox, and/or wolf is a woman. Your work is excellent and much better than my own. Keep it up!

[Drachen]

Considering you're "trying to get a feel" for it, that's some damn fine work. The only odd thing I noticed was the tusks. They look kind of flat and not quite like they are coming out of the tooth line. Good stuff, in any case.

Originally Posted by Kantomaster1111

but if you're planning males as well just make sure either the cat, fox, and/or wolf is a woman.

Down, boy. Let the artist do his work. Seriously though, considering he posted this here and the people on his devwatch list, I'm guessing he's one of us...

[Kantomaster1111]

Originally Posted by Drachen

Considering you're "trying to get a feel" for it, that's some damn fine work. The only odd thing I noticed was the tusks. They look kind of flat and not quite like they are coming out of the tooth line. Good stuff, in any case.



Down, boy. Let the artist do his work. Seriously though, considering he posted this here and the people on his devwatch list, I'm guessing he's one of us...

You get down, he asked for feedback and that's what I gave him.

[civis-rasa]

[QUOTE=Drachen;709203]Considering you're "trying to get a feel" for it, that's some damn fine work. The only odd thing I noticed was the tusks. They look kind of flat and not quite like they are coming out of the tooth line. Good stuff, in any case.

I've taken note of that, but I don't really see that issue. But perhaps my perception is off, I've made a small change in attempts to resolve the problem you see. If you can, please take another look a let me know if you agree or not.

Regardless, I appreciate and value your opinion. Thank you.

[civis-rasa]

Originally Posted by Kantomaster1111

Sounds like you're moving in the right direction with fur and tails! I personally like to see transformed women but if you're planning males as well just make sure either the cat, fox, and/or wolf is a woman. Your work is excellent and much better than my own. Keep it up!

I haven't really thought about working with male models right away, but I probably will at some point. I appreciate the female form, but that doesn't mean the male form is ugly and I can see artistic benefits for creating male hybrids in the future.

Regardless I'm glad you enjoy my first piece and I hope my future projects continue to please.

[Crash Ichimonji]

Originally Posted by civis-rasa

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Thank you. Umm, ninja turtle type? I guess I'll have to look around more.

A common issue I've seen with TF's dealing with animals with cloven hooves (pigs, cows, sheep, goats, etc) is that the artist just merges the middle and index finger as well as the ring and pinky fingers each as a thick finger making the hand resemble the hands the Teenage Murant Ninja Turtles are depicted as having (shape-wise).

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Attached is a picture of what I meant in my post.

[civis-rasa]

Originally Posted by Crash Ichimonji

A common issue I've seen with TF's dealing with animals with cloven hooves (pigs, cows, sheep, goats, etc) is that the artist just merges the middle and index finger as well as the ring and pinky fingers each as a thick finger making the hand resemble the hands the Teenage Murant Ninja Turtles are depicted as having (shape-wise).

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Attached is a picture of what I meant in my post.

I see what you mean now, interesting. The idea isn't bad to me, but I can see how it could be overused and not as appealing in some respects. Still, I like the idea of including some of the hoof/claw into the hand where possible.

[Crash Ichimonji]

Wow, that's quite good. I like how the hoof-hands look more like hooves instead of the 'Ninja Turtle'-type fingers I've seen way too often.

[civis-rasa]

Originally Posted by Crash Ichimonji

Wow, that's quite good. I like how the hoof-hands look more like hooves instead of the 'Ninja Turtle'-type fingers I've seen way too often.

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Thank you. Umm, ninja turtle type? I guess I'll have to look around more.