Good Story On Overflowingbra.com

clumbum · 11-02-2006

Yes, right, well, this isn't much of a find but I thought I may as well mention it here anyway.

I just had a pop round to Overflowingbra.com and noticed that the good fellow Gaffenheimer made an astounding story about BE. I was just wondering if the Gaffenheimer here is the same as the Gaffenheimer there, also, although it is rather a pitiful attempt at supplying something to the forum, I thought it was about time I did.

http://www.overflowingbra.com/results.htm?varname=455

I'll delete the thread if it is the correct Gaffenheimer and he wants me to, just thought everyone here might like to know.

Prof. Frink313 · 11-02-2006

I read the story: Mammalaria last night. It was is a well written story and worth a read. Plus I bet that Gaffenheimer would not mind the extra attention from fellow BE fans.

Mr. Gun Happy · 11-02-2006

I love Overflowingbra.com, they got some of the best stories around.

Three cheers for Gaffenheimer...if they're the same person! (Drinks Rum)

The Lord of War · 11-02-2006

yea i think i found the process through the overflowing bra but im not sure.

Mattariel · 11-02-2006

As soon as I saw 'ment' in the changes description, I immediatly backed away. I can't stand mental bimbo-ification, and that's what that descriptor means 99.9999% of the time.

SoylentOrange · 11-02-2006

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Originally Posted by Mattariel

As soon as I saw 'ment' in the changes description, I immediatly backed away. I can't stand mental bimbo-ification, and that's what that descriptor means 99.9999% of the time.

It's nothing so bad yet, just a little bit of a wandering eye, but yeah, I really do hate the "Oh all of a sudden all I can think about is sex and pleasing men!!" stories.

That said, Gaff has himself a pretty nice "Part 1" of a story- I can bet we'll be seeing that temple at one point or another pretty soon, with pretty expansive results.

Gaff, if you're reading this and open to comments, don't make them bimbos, at least not totally. Leave them some control.

PrBlahBlahtson · 11-02-2006

For a while, I actually backed away from a lot of the other "undesirable" tags too. Some of them are big, honking "NO" signs in my book. For example, transgender really isn't anywhere in my tastes. However, there have been a few stories that do incorporate TG elements, but don't really dwell on them very heavily. They don't completely drop the fact that a guy becomes a girl or vice versa, but it's so... unemphasized that it really doesn't make the story less desirable.

A good example of Ment not being bad might be... hmm, what was the name... Act of Faith. There's some mind control/ment going on there, but it doesn't so much turn her into a bimbo as... make her less up-tight.

Gaffenheimer · 11-03-2006

Wow. My ears are burning. Wow. Um, this was my first story... are there really that few good stories on that site as of late?

I'll say again: wow.

Needless to say, that is me, and thank you for the... publicity. Heh. I'm working on the second part as we speak...

I sort of wish I had that part done so I could have submitted it to the contest, but oh well.

Thank you for the comments, and for the record, I don't plan to make them less intelligent, just overwhelmed by their sensations. And, of course, a little less inhibited. Although I do like stories where characters (male or female) are bimbified to the point where they can do nothing but obssess over their own primal urges, I don't feel like writing them.

SoylentOrange · 11-03-2006

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Originally Posted by Gaffenheimer

are there really that few good stories on that site as of late?

Severely. Some of the stuff I've read on OFB wouldn't be worth lining a wastepaper-basket with.

GenericName · 11-04-2006

Quote:

Originally Posted by Gaffenheimer

are there really that few good stories on that site as of late?

The Story Contest is going on right now, so yes, there has been a severe drought of stories lately.

*reads*

11-04-2006

Story contest is over, my friend. Did you not check the Results Page on OFB? And the reason alot of "good" stories have not shown on there is the lack of feedback on them in the past. Ask anyone in here about a story, and you'd get 10000000 responses (thats a compliment to you guys), but alot of them aren't here and they rely on direct feedback to them (hence why they include an e-mail) and not alot of people utilize it. I do, as I'm sure there are a few others on this site that do. But believe me, as an avid fiction writer (I try to do something once a week) I know the frustrations on seeing the views but never getting any feedback. The true dedicated writers are the ones that continue in spite of such. The ones that are just doing it for one are the ones that will alot of times go for other green pastures.

Buddy, I'm gonna read your story tomorrow and let you know what I think of it. From seeing others on here, I'm sure I'll enjoy it.

One last thing, did anyone else really love The Game (i believe that was the title) where it was the Jumanji type BE game? Has a follow up ever been written by the author or anyone else? I think out of all the stories, that one was my favorite by far. I know on Choose Your Own Change website they have a story line that goes that route, but I'd rather read a full story like it instead of a choose-your-own-adventure. I remember reading The Game back when MarkT's Story Archive was still active on the BEA and now that its long dead (as is my own writing gallery on the BEA) I rely on the OFB, which like many of you have said, has gotten kinda.. meh as of late.

<i>Edit: I just realized this post puts me out of 'lurker' mode. Heh I guess I don't have much to say about art but when it comes to writing, a passion in which I love very much, I'll open up to ya.</i>

Kyutetsuki · 11-04-2006

That's last years contest. There's a new one going on.

11-02-2006	#1
clumbum Biscuits and tea Join Date: May 2006 Location: United Kingdom Posts: 110	Good Story On Overflowingbra.com Yes, right, well, this isn't much of a find but I thought I may as well mention it here anyway. I just had a pop round to Overflowingbra.com and noticed that the good fellow Gaffenheimer made an astounding story about BE. I was just wondering if the Gaffenheimer here is the same as the Gaffenheimer there, also, although it is rather a pitiful attempt at supplying something to the forum, I thought it was about time I did. http://www.overflowingbra.com/results.htm?varname=455 I'll delete the thread if it is the correct Gaffenheimer and he wants me to, just thought everyone here might like to know. Last edited by clumbum; 11-02-2006 at 05:07 PM.

11-02-2006	#2
Prof. Frink313 I like Three-head Monkey Join Date: May 2005 Location: Elgin, Ill. Posts: 237	I read the story: Mammalaria last night. It was is a well written story and worth a read. Plus I bet that Gaffenheimer would not mind the extra attention from fellow BE fans. __________________ Self-entitled Fake Shemp.

11-02-2006	#5
Mattariel Supreme lurker Join Date: May 2005 Posts: 324	As soon as I saw 'ment' in the changes description, I immediatly backed away. I can't stand mental bimbo-ification, and that's what that descriptor means 99.9999% of the time. __________________

11-02-2006	#7
PrBlahBlahtson is not a mod. Join Date: Jan 2006 Location: Northeast USA Posts: 4,188	For a while, I actually backed away from a lot of the other "undesirable" tags too. Some of them are big, honking "NO" signs in my book. For example, transgender really isn't anywhere in my tastes. However, there have been a few stories that do incorporate TG elements, but don't really dwell on them very heavily. They don't completely drop the fact that a guy becomes a girl or vice versa, but it's so... unemphasized that it really doesn't make the story less desirable. A good example of Ment not being bad might be... hmm, what was the name... Act of Faith. There's some mind control/ment going on there, but it doesn't so much turn her into a bimbo as... make her less up-tight. __________________ It's not that I don't like you. I'm just direct.

11-04-2006	#11
drummererb Guest Posts: n/a	Story contest is over, my friend. Did you not check the Results Page on OFB? And the reason alot of "good" stories have not shown on there is the lack of feedback on them in the past. Ask anyone in here about a story, and you'd get 10000000 responses (thats a compliment to you guys), but alot of them aren't here and they rely on direct feedback to them (hence why they include an e-mail) and not alot of people utilize it. I do, as I'm sure there are a few others on this site that do. But believe me, as an avid fiction writer (I try to do something once a week) I know the frustrations on seeing the views but never getting any feedback. The true dedicated writers are the ones that continue in spite of such. The ones that are just doing it for one are the ones that will alot of times go for other green pastures. Buddy, I'm gonna read your story tomorrow and let you know what I think of it. From seeing others on here, I'm sure I'll enjoy it. One last thing, did anyone else really love The Game (i believe that was the title) where it was the Jumanji type BE game? Has a follow up ever been written by the author or anyone else? I think out of all the stories, that one was my favorite by far. I know on Choose Your Own Change website they have a story line that goes that route, but I'd rather read a full story like it instead of a choose-your-own-adventure. I remember reading The Game back when MarkT's Story Archive was still active on the BEA and now that its long dead (as is my own writing gallery on the BEA) I rely on the OFB, which like many of you have said, has gotten kinda.. meh as of late. <i>Edit: I just realized this post puts me out of 'lurker' mode. Heh I guess I don't have much to say about art but when it comes to writing, a passion in which I love very much, I'll open up to ya.</i> Last edited by drummererb; 11-04-2006 at 04:17 AM.

11-02-2006	#3
Mr. Gun Happy ... Join Date: May 2006 Posts: 1,686	I love Overflowingbra.com, they got some of the best stories around. Three cheers for Gaffenheimer...if they're the same person! (Drinks Rum)

11-02-2006	#4
The Lord of War Process Master? lol what? Join Date: Nov 2005 Location: NYC baby Posts: 902	yea i think i found the process through the overflowing bra but im not sure.

11-03-2006	#8
Gaffenheimer Death is Near Join Date: Oct 2005 Location: Cyprus Creek, ND Posts: 1,207	Wow. My ears are burning. Wow. Um, this was my first story... are there really that few good stories on that site as of late? I'll say again: wow. Needless to say, that is me, and thank you for the... publicity. Heh. I'm working on the second part as we speak... I sort of wish I had that part done so I could have submitted it to the contest, but oh well. Thank you for the comments, and for the record, I don't plan to make them less intelligent, just overwhelmed by their sensations. And, of course, a little less inhibited. Although I do like stories where characters (male or female) are bimbified to the point where they can do nothing but obssess over their own primal urges, I don't feel like writing them.

11-04-2006	#12
Kyutetsuki misspelled bloodsucker Join Date: Jan 2006 Location: Suh-wee-den Posts: 108	That's last years contest. There's a new one going on. __________________ I'm so happy that you're coming out to play.