Havent-Slept update

spongebathe83 · 01-13-2007

Just submitted a few DA drawings and I thought I'd share it with you guys.

Woke up swollen 1&2 - added some alliteration to make it seem more interesting
http://www.deviantart.com/deviation/46574396/
http://www.deviantart.com/deviation/46575308/
Kisser
http://www.deviantart.com/deviation/46575469/

Even though I've pretty much stopped coloring (time consuming), I hope you've noticed that I've improved somewhat over the past few weeks(cuz drawing is fun).
Feedback PLZ!

Edit:
added another image

Kvasir · 01-13-2007

Man, you're good. I faved the one, but I did like all three. It was some very cool angles to work with. Great job man, love seeing your stuff.

Aahz · 01-13-2007

Nice work, you're clearly getting better.

Just noticed one thing, in the 2nd pic her shirt and boobs don't seem to match. You can see the back hem of her shirt and it doesn't seem to match her boobs.

Aahz.

Geocat · 01-13-2007

Very nice! My favorite of yours so far!

Professor · 01-14-2007

Well done. Keep up the good work. I especially liked the second one.

spongebathe83 · 01-14-2007

Quote:

Originally Posted by Aahz

Nice work, you're clearly getting better.

Just noticed one thing, in the 2nd pic her shirt and boobs don't seem to match. You can see the back hem of her shirt and it doesn't seem to match her boobs.

Aahz.

Yeah, I noticed that minutes after I submitted it. I'm also a little unhappy with the placement of the bellybutton in the first one. Oh well, still pretyy darn good, i say.
Thnx 4 teh feedback

Aahz · 01-14-2007

Quote:

Originally Posted by spongebathe83

Oh well, still pretyy darn good, i say.

I agree, good work overall.

The Lord of War · 01-14-2007

Wow, you never cease to amaze me.

01-13-2007	#2
Kvasir Thinking WAY to much Join Date: Jan 2006 Location: In the middle of nowhere Posts: 162	Man, you're good. I faved the one, but I did like all three. It was some very cool angles to work with. Great job man, love seeing your stuff. __________________ His name was Kvasir. He was so steeped in all matters and mysteries of the nine worlds since the fire and ice first met in Ginnungagap that no god nor man nor giant nor dwarf ever regretted putting him a question or asking his opinion. ~Mead of Poetry~ http://golseum.deviantart.com/ "Hey dude you're so uncool, but hey that's alright. Like, there's no need to get up tight. My eyes reflect the stars and smile lights up my face, we're on an amazing flight in space."

01-13-2007	#3
Aahz Process Fan Join Date: Jan 2006 Posts: 76	Nice work, you're clearly getting better. Just noticed one thing, in the 2nd pic her shirt and boobs don't seem to match. You can see the back hem of her shirt and it doesn't seem to match her boobs. Aahz.

01-13-2007	#4
Geocat Process Fan Join Date: Nov 2005 Posts: 97	Very nice! My favorite of yours so far!

01-14-2007	#5
Professor Observer of Growth Join Date: Jun 2006 Location: Way down south in Dixie. Posts: 59	Well done. Keep up the good work. I especially liked the second one.

01-14-2007	#8
The Lord of War Process Master? lol what? Join Date: Nov 2005 Location: NYC baby Posts: 902	Wow, you never cease to amaze me.