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Skiff · 09-25-2005

Hello all, long time listener first time caller here. I?ve been working on a little project here for the past 3 days and thought this would be the best place to get some feedback on it. Also, since I don?t have a website? it?s a ?Process? exclusive.
So here it is? like it or hate it, my art. I scaled them down in size and color for this post. They?re still just sketch work and I?ll go over them again later to finish them and add color. First I?m going to finish all the pages naturally.

On with the show?

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Fake_Name · 09-25-2005

I like it. Do continue.

the one thing I would recomend is some sort of markings or speech bubbles to mark who is saying what, or doing the text on a computer.

Kyu · 09-25-2005

I agree w/Fake_Name. I like your art style, and I'm interested to see where the comic goes next. But it's very hard to read scanned pencil text, especially when it's kind of small and rather light (I mostly skipped the two long text panels). I would definitely consider just writing out your script and then using a computer program for the text.

Other than that, two thumbs way, way up, Gene. (And Fake_Name, I think your avatar is planning some devious scheme... those closed eyes are just a facade!)

Istmael · 09-25-2005

They look awesome!!! Can't wait to see the finished work!

Sutibaru · 09-25-2005

If you have Adobe Photoshop, you can click "shift+ctrl+L" and it fixed all of the darks and lights.

But it looks good man. A lot of reading, but that is usually good.

animewolf · 09-25-2005

good stuff

09-25-2005

Not bad work, really!

I think you only need to apply on backgrounds to get a better effect, but bodies are good, faces too...

I also suggest, if you like to have an "own place" beyond this board, to create a Yahoo group to show your artworks...

This is simply an idea: new painters born from simply things...

LK · 11-14-2005

With this much stuff, it'd be great if you started moving from posting on here to updating some type of art dump site (Like Deviantart) then linking updates, or something of that measure

Skiff · 11-14-2005

Lorekeep...
Sallright if you delete this thread and I just start another with just stuff for part 2... or would you just prefer I go to deviant art instead...
Up to you it is your forum. I just figured this is less bagage posting here.
...oh and did you want higher quality files of the first part for your donations on the main site?
...or nevermind...

Yah and I just checked on Deviant Art. "No Adult material" in there terms of service... So I'm out. (I don't think cheep cartoon "BE" P0rn is "in good taste.")

I am however going to look into getting my own EL-Cheepo server going. We'll see... I hope.

LK · 11-14-2005

Skiff I'm gonna be more leinent on you since you produce original content, so go ahead and keep this thread going.

It might be nice if you consolidated all your stuff in the first couple threads for all to see instead of digging through the thread?

Skiff · 11-15-2005

Cool... but still, go ahead and delete this thread. I'ma start a new one with the right title. I'll repost the first part and start with the second part and build on to it like I did to this one.

It'll Keep things neet and tidy.

Peace out.

Skiff · 09-25-2005

cool feedback... Lets see.

yeah when I go over them finaly I'll CG it and add text boxes.

I kind of figured that people would have a hard time reading it. which is ok, if I hurt your eyes. Cuz I hurt my had writing it. They are sketches after all.

I use Paint Shop Pro 5. No need to read most of the text now, when I CG it it'll make it worth the read again.

I was planning on making 3D backgrounds... Really cheep ones using Half-Life 1 Worldcraft map editor. Since I have no 3D modeling programs. (good ones). The're not horrible.

09-25-2005	#1
Skiff Sometimes Artist Join Date: Sep 2005 Location: Canada Posts: 148	Image - Skiff Art Hello all, long time listener first time caller here. I?ve been working on a little project here for the past 3 days and thought this would be the best place to get some feedback on it. Also, since I don?t have a website? it?s a ?Process? exclusive. So here it is? like it or hate it, my art. I scaled them down in size and color for this post. They?re still just sketch work and I?ll go over them again later to finish them and add color. First I?m going to finish all the pages naturally. On with the show? (Attachments moved to new thread) Last edited by Skiff; 11-18-2005 at 02:37 AM.

09-25-2005	#5
Sutibaru --- Join Date: May 2005 Posts: 5,865	If you have Adobe Photoshop, you can click "shift+ctrl+L" and it fixed all of the darks and lights. But it looks good man. A lot of reading, but that is usually good. __________________ Deviantart\|FurAffinity\|Tumblr\|Picarto

11-14-2005	#8
LK Process Disciple Join Date: May 2005 Posts: 3,258	With this much stuff, it'd be great if you started moving from posting on here to updating some type of art dump site (Like Deviantart) then linking updates, or something of that measure __________________

11-14-2005	#9
Skiff Sometimes Artist Join Date: Sep 2005 Location: Canada Posts: 148	Lorekeep... Sallright if you delete this thread and I just start another with just stuff for part 2... or would you just prefer I go to deviant art instead... Up to you it is your forum. I just figured this is less bagage posting here. ...oh and did you want higher quality files of the first part for your donations on the main site? ...or nevermind... Yah and I just checked on Deviant Art. "No Adult material" in there terms of service... So I'm out. (I don't think cheep cartoon "BE" P0rn is "in good taste.") I am however going to look into getting my own EL-Cheepo server going. We'll see... I hope. Last edited by Skiff; 11-14-2005 at 10:50 PM.

11-14-2005	#10
LK Process Disciple Join Date: May 2005 Posts: 3,258	Skiff I'm gonna be more leinent on you since you produce original content, so go ahead and keep this thread going. It might be nice if you consolidated all your stuff in the first couple threads for all to see instead of digging through the thread? __________________

09-25-2005	#2
Fake_Name Archives everything Join Date: Jun 2005 Location: Fake_Place Posts: 680	I like it. Do continue. the one thing I would recomend is some sort of markings or speech bubbles to mark who is saying what, or doing the text on a computer.

09-25-2005	#3
Kyu Guinness... Brilliant! Join Date: Jun 2005 Posts: 141	I agree w/Fake_Name. I like your art style, and I'm interested to see where the comic goes next. But it's very hard to read scanned pencil text, especially when it's kind of small and rather light (I mostly skipped the two long text panels). I would definitely consider just writing out your script and then using a computer program for the text. Other than that, two thumbs way, way up, Gene. (And Fake_Name, I think your avatar is planning some devious scheme... those closed eyes are just a facade!)

09-25-2005	#4
Istmael Frequent Poster Join Date: May 2005 Posts: 159	They look awesome!!! Can't wait to see the finished work!

09-25-2005	#6
animewolf Process Fan Join Date: Jul 2005 Posts: 91	good stuff

09-25-2005	#7
Gas75 Guest Posts: n/a	Not bad work, really! I think you only need to apply on backgrounds to get a better effect, but bodies are good, faces too... I also suggest, if you like to have an "own place" beyond this board, to create a Yahoo group to show your artworks... This is simply an idea: new painters born from simply things...

11-15-2005	#11
Skiff Sometimes Artist Join Date: Sep 2005 Location: Canada Posts: 148	Cool... but still, go ahead and delete this thread. I'ma start a new one with the right title. I'll repost the first part and start with the second part and build on to it like I did to this one. It'll Keep things neet and tidy. Peace out. Last edited by Skiff; 11-18-2005 at 02:15 AM.