Excellent Women to Anthro-Cat Story

frice2000 · 08-28-2007

I don't see very many stories linked here, however one I read recently is very much stuck in my head and a cursory search did not reveal it to be already linked to on these forums. Anyway, this story contains in my opinion a lot of process and is honestly one of the best TF stories I've read in quite a while.

Also on the forums that its hosted on it doesn't seem to be getting enough love, so I thought I would link it here, its a really impressive story by an author named DarkMWE.

Edit:
http://doc.furvect.com/Stories/MWE/theproduction.html This is I believe the permanent link to this story.

08-28-2007

incest is an instant blocker for me, even with mature people.

frice2000 · 08-28-2007

Yeah, forgot about that ending...the middle transformation part though was superb...ending was as you said inchide.

tbumpkins · 08-28-2007

Eh, too much work with not enough pay off. Enjoyed the non-sex, post-TF reaction section the most. I do like MWE's writing style though. Even when it goes into those...weird places, it's part of his M.O.

Chica · 08-29-2007

Verrrry good story. MWE, you still have it

DarkMWE · 08-30-2007

Hmm... I'm always impressed by how many ways my work gets around but so little is spoken about it, in spite of the fact that I'm always looking for feedback but never get anything productive. And here I thought the rape and ownership themes would be the most attacked and "discussion" provoking.

So, what I'm hearing is that to make the story better, I need to remove the incest from the story, what little there is... I can do that. Beyond that....? What would you like to see?

quote: Eh, too much work with not enough pay off. Enjoyed the non-sex, post-TF reaction section the most. I do like MWE's writing style though. Even when it goes into those...weird places, it's part of his M.O. /quote

"Too much work, not enough pay off..." Forgive me, I've had a long day at work, and soon I have to start looking for a new job so my brain's a bit fried, but... What does that mean? Could you explain what you're looking for to me? And... "weird places"... I need to know what you think my M.O. is.

I'd like to learn what you all feel needs improving with my writing style. Come on people, I NEED FEEDBACK! Tell me what's right, tell me what's wrong, just COMUNICATE!

Let the booze flow, let the lyrics glide from hand to keyboard, let the thoughts and the music loose! Now type, type like my stories depend upon it!

frice2000 · 08-30-2007

Feedback...feedback...Well I liked the story quite a bit except for the transformation of her mother/incest stuff at the end. The transformation was well done and the rape/ownership part of the story is fine since that is the whole point of the story. I thought it was quite well written although the beginning of the story did seem to drag on for a little bit too long. The part with the cow slave at the end seemed sort of tacked on, and I feel a little bit more time could have been given to the story behind the corporation transforming all these people. Other then those few qualms though I thought it was a great story. See I provided feedback...Whee! :P.

GRAVENAU80 · 09-03-2007

I like the first 2 3rds but the ending let it down.

Dimples · 09-03-2007

The idea of having two "personalities" was appealing to me. Especially how it started to emerge and the techniques that "Master" used to let Kitty emerge. I really enjoyed the transformation because I had a similar dream, so I can relate to the experience.

ivan11422 · 09-03-2007

Great job MWE! I liked all the story! You are talented!

http://ivan11422.deviantart.com

08-28-2007	#1
frice2000 "My way of thanking you" Join Date: Jan 2006 Posts: 401	Excellent Women to Anthro-Cat Story I don't see very many stories linked here, however one I read recently is very much stuck in my head and a cursory search did not reveal it to be already linked to on these forums. Anyway, this story contains in my opinion a lot of process and is honestly one of the best TF stories I've read in quite a while. Also on the forums that its hosted on it doesn't seem to be getting enough love, so I thought I would link it here, its a really impressive story by an author named DarkMWE. Edit: http://doc.furvect.com/Stories/MWE/theproduction.html This is I believe the permanent link to this story. Last edited by frice2000; 10-10-2007 at 08:39 PM.

08-28-2007	#4
tbumpkins Agent of HAMMER Join Date: Jun 2005 Posts: 127	Eh, too much work with not enough pay off. Enjoyed the non-sex, post-TF reaction section the most. I do like MWE's writing style though. Even when it goes into those...weird places, it's part of his M.O. __________________ If you don't let go, I'm gonna lick your hand - Deadpool

08-29-2007	#5
Chica catgirl Join Date: Jun 2007 Location: Hannover, Germany Posts: 39	Verrrry good story. MWE, you still have it __________________ There are two kinds of people: Those with an open mind and those, who should just shut up!

09-03-2007	#8
GRAVENAU80 Aussie Leecher Join Date: Sep 2007 Location: In a house Posts: 146	I like the first 2 3rds but the ending let it down. __________________ Calling all SW's your whipping boy is here

08-28-2007	#2
inchide Guest Posts: n/a	incest is an instant blocker for me, even with mature people.

08-30-2007	#6
DarkMWE Frequent Poster Join Date: May 2007 Posts: 118	Hmm... I'm always impressed by how many ways my work gets around but so little is spoken about it, in spite of the fact that I'm always looking for feedback but never get anything productive. And here I thought the rape and ownership themes would be the most attacked and "discussion" provoking. So, what I'm hearing is that to make the story better, I need to remove the incest from the story, what little there is... I can do that. Beyond that....? What would you like to see? quote: Eh, too much work with not enough pay off. Enjoyed the non-sex, post-TF reaction section the most. I do like MWE's writing style though. Even when it goes into those...weird places, it's part of his M.O. /quote "Too much work, not enough pay off..." Forgive me, I've had a long day at work, and soon I have to start looking for a new job so my brain's a bit fried, but... What does that mean? Could you explain what you're looking for to me? And... "weird places"... I need to know what you think my M.O. is. I'd like to learn what you all feel needs improving with my writing style. Come on people, I NEED FEEDBACK! Tell me what's right, tell me what's wrong, just COMUNICATE! Let the booze flow, let the lyrics glide from hand to keyboard, let the thoughts and the music loose! Now type, type like my stories depend upon it!

09-03-2007	#9
Dimples Doesn't Belong to You! Join Date: Apr 2007 Posts: 37	The idea of having two "personalities" was appealing to me. Especially how it started to emerge and the techniques that "Master" used to let Kitty emerge. I really enjoyed the transformation because I had a similar dream, so I can relate to the experience.

09-03-2007	#10
ivan11422 Process Disciple Join Date: May 2006 Posts: 1,144	Great job MWE! I liked all the story! You are talented! http://ivan11422.deviantart.com