Beach Ball-ed

[Archangel-Dreadnought]

A sequence that started off fairly good, but, really didn't finish up all that good.

[ToboR]

It's not that bad, although she seemed to get a little too "angular" in the end, especially in her chest area. Still, I like how her hands and feet are poking out.

[thejakeman]

whew, something reeks in here.




reeks of awesome!

[Archangel-Dreadnought]

Originally Posted by thejakeman

whew, something reeks in here.




reeks of awesome!

Hardly, it not even mediocre.

[SoylentOrange]

Have to agree with Tobor that you start to lose any sense of roundness or softness at about the third row. You've always had kind of an angular bias to your linework, but the last few panels are full on "You could put someone's eye out with those things" territory.

Still, the first two rows are pretty nice.

She be lookin' like that lass from the Arabian Disney movie...

[Archangel-Dreadnought]

Originally Posted by SoylentOrange

Have to agree with Tobor that you start to lose any sense of roundness or softness at about the third row. You've always had kind of an angular bias to your linework, but the last few panels are full on "You could put someone's eye out with those things" territory.

Still, the first two rows are pretty nice.

Those ones are far from "poke someone's eye out", well, at least compared to some of the nipples on my muscle women. I also think that the comment about the third row being where it starts looking bad is right, might have to redo this whole thing at a later date.