Two Friends, By Beetlebomb SG-MG Prt1

[SkruLuce]

Oh god, your avatar..."Who's hidin' all my puddin' pops?"

Sorry, OT now:

I like where this is going, but I'd suggest using a program other than the forum's software so that you have the benefit of formatting paragraphs--indenting, line spacing, and such--to make it look cleaner. I'm not a fan of big blocks of text; it looks messy, graphically, and it's hard to read.

[Beetlebomb]

Originally Posted by SkruLuce

Oh god, your avatar..."Who's hidin' all my puddin' pops?"

Sorry, OT now:

I like where this is going, but I'd suggest using a program other than the forum's software so that you have the benefit of formatting paragraphs--indenting, line spacing, and such--to make it look cleaner. I'm not a fan of big blocks of text; it looks messy, graphically, and it's hard to read.

Well I don't have Word processor on my computer sadly so all that is available to me is WordPad. I just copied and pasted my work from there to the post.

I could, however, just manually go in and clean it up a bit, which i'll probably get around to doing very soon.


Beetlebomb

[gammera1976]

I have a feeling Gen's growing and Jake's falling asleep all the time are connected. Plus I have a bad feeling about her last line: "My little boy". Hmmmm....... ( leaves to ponder the possibilities)

[Beetlebomb]

Well here's part 3.
@gammera1976: I actually don't plan on having Jakes frequent sleeps to take part in the plot of my story. I mainly used it as a way for time to pass without the story seeming jumpy. Like I said this is Slow-growth MG so I had to give the effect of her growing over time. As for the last sentece of Part 2, that is yet to be answered.

Enjoy



Two Friends
By Beetlebomb
Part 3


My senses slowly faded back into my head as I woke up. I could hear the deep soft crashing of the waves hitting the shore. Slowly coming too, I wiped the sand that had fallen onto my face by the wind. 4:00 allready?, I thought to myself; I wonder where Gen went off too. There was a blue umbrella over my head. She must have put it up for me. I gazed out across the ocean surface and soaked up the beautiful sight. Just as I was about to stand up and start looking around for her when I felt a hand on my shoulder,

"I got you a hotdog, Babe. Thought you'd be hungry about now"

"Thanks hun, I appreciate it"

She sat next to me. I was allready well used to her new found height and bust. She began,

"You know baby, I had a really great day with you.Oh, what time is it?"

"Mmmmmmmm, around 4:15, why?"

"It's kind of late to be at the beach, don't you say? How about we take a quick dip in the ocean before heading back to my place for some 'fun time' ?"

Her big grin appearing on her face. I knew what she was implying.

"Sounds good!" Standing up really fast.

"Last one in is a rotten egg!"

I sprinted off taking a good head start. I could hear her gasp and get up behind me.

"CHEATER!!!" She screamed,

I looked back and saw her gaining on me; fast! oh shit oh shit oh shit, I huffed and puffed full throttle. Almost there! I touched the wet sand, my feet sinking in with every step. I saw a blur zoom past me. then a *Sploosh*

"Yay!! You cheater, haha."

Her wet hair was draped over her shoulders, meeting her full breasts in her now tight green bikini top. She stood up shivering,

"I shouldn't have done that... the water is SO cold!"

I started laughing.

"Hey stop it! That's not funny!"

Splashing me with the freezing cold water.

"No need to get all touchy! Sheesh"

I joined her in the water just as the end of a wave came and pushed us off our feet slightly, getting the rest of my not-yet-regulated-to-the-cold body wet. We just sat there for a while, letting our bodys adjust to the temperature.

"Hey lets go deeper in babe" grabbing my hand and pulling me further into the water. At first the water went to my waist, then my chest, and to my neck.

"Honey I think we're deep enough"

I looked up at her, his tits were halfway out of the water.

"Nonsense, I got you. Don't worry"

Still holding my hand she tugged me deeper. My feet no longer touched the sandy bottom. I started to panic as I remembered all the stories i've heard of people drifting off into the ocean from rip tides. Gen could tell I was having trouble keeping my head above water, She grabbed my tush and held me against her hip.

"See? All better" but it was not all better, it was starting to get difficult seeing shore and I had to tell her this was far enough.

"Honey stop! Look how far away from shore we are. Let's just go home, i've had enough."

I looked into her eyes. She frowned for a moment, but that quickly changed to a grin.

"Ok, last one to the car is a rotten egg" She was going to do what I did to her earlier.

She let go of me and started shuffling through the water, still able to touch the ground barely with her feet. Immediately I started doing swift strokes toward shore. At first I was making good progress. My goal was not to beat her, but to stay alive. I could see the umbrella now, almost there. I could make out people and little kids playing in the sand. All of a sudden it felt as if someone was holding onto my leg or something because I didn't see anything infront of me get closer. My instincts kicked in and I started swimming as hard as I could! I was caught in a rip tide!

"HONEY! HONEY! HELP HELP!" but she was long gone allready running over the sand hill towards the car.

Just before my head was pulled underneath the current I saw a lifeguard start sprinting towards my general area. He wouldn't make it on time. I had to hold my breath! I was spinning around upside down. I felt as if I was in an underwater rollercoaster right! This can't be the end! Stupid Gen, why didn't she look back at me after a while!

I felt a hand jult down and pull me out of the whirlpool. It was Gen! "Baby, oh my god are you ok!?" my face must have been as white as a ghost because she could tell I was out of it. She put me on her shoulder and starting running (yes running) to shore. I got handed over to the lifeguard and they laid me back on the sand.

"Are you ok sir? Just calm down sir, CALM DOWN! CALM DOWN SIR, JUST CALM DOWN" I was perfectly still not saying anything.

It was the lifeguard breathing hard, not me. "SIR YOUR GOING TO HAVE TO CALM DO--" Gen pushed him away.

"Idiot", she snickered.

*cough* "I -- I told you going out that far was a bad idea."

"I-- I-- thought you'd make it back just fine. I mean I could shuffle through the water over there still, I thought you'd be fine."

"Well you thought wrong. I could have died out there Gen!"

She was crying into her hands.

"I never meant for that to happen to you!" She slammed her fist into the sand.

"I was so stupid, I could never forgive myself if something had happened to you"

She looked up at me from her hands. Waiting for a response.

"I--.....It's--... Don't worry. I'm fine now and that is all the matters" I sat up and gave her a hug which she returned.



Yet another quiet drive home. It had been another long 'exciting' day for the two of us.

It was almost 6:30pm by the time we pulled up into her driveway. I couldn't help but notice as we walked through the door that her head was only missing the top by a couple inches now, and she was wearing sandals. I didn't even bother asking her, but she definately looked to be around 6'5 or 6'6". Her boobs got bigger also. I'm guessing around an E-cup, because she was positively blowing up and out of her Green bikini top. I could see her part of her areolae even with her top covered correctly. Immediately I got a not so very easily to conceal erection in my trunks.

I took a seat on the couch while she shuffled over to the big brown leather chair. My eyes dashing up and down her body, doing a mental body comparison. After a casual sigh I noticed she did the same thing. I nonchalantly let her look me up...or down. I knew she had seen my erection, which I didn't really mind. She was my girlfriend afterall, right? Stare on. I saw another one of her cynical smiles form onto her face...she was still in her now almost slutty looking bikini.

"You know, I couldn't help but notice a rather large protrusion in your trunks. Did you not clean it out before we left because I think there might be a fish or something in there." giggling.

"I'm sorry, this happens sometimes after long drives sometimes (I lied). I gave up trying to hide it around you anyway."

She got up from the leather chair.

"Mmmmmm, is that so?" She licked her lips. Slowly walking up to me.

"Maybe I could help you get rid of that then? What do you say?"

My mind was mush. I couldn't think straight nor talk after hearing that from a girl that I didn't even come up to her chin with.

"I...................." Staring at her chest.

She looked down at her twins, "Mmmmmm, you'd like to stick your little old head inbetween these wouldn't you?

She was now right next to me and helped me get up off the couch. Both standing I could now tell the mighty difference between the two of us.

With one quick tug her bikini top came off. "Oops...look what I did" She turned her back on me and leaned forward to pick it up, giving me an amazing view of her huge perfectly heart-shaped ass. Almost involuntarily I grabbed her butt cheeks and started squeezing.

She quickly turned around and gave me a big toothy smile "I knew you'd do that!". She put her long arms around me and pulled me to her chest. I was now between her two big soft mounds of flesh. My ears were covered by them and I fell upon complete silence. All I could hear was her heart beat. I felt so...safe.





P.S: For those that may be wondering, I do not plan on putting any SM in here at all. ty.

[wolfman-al]

Very cute!
I wonder how big the girl will end up. Will she end up at just 8 or 10 feet or will she never stop growing (please the later!)?

Heh. Better than my stuff. (Thing. Whatever.)

Good job. I love it.

[Beetlebomb]

Part 4 won't be coming out for a while I'm afraid. I'm taking into account all the comments, suggestions, and flames i've gotten from several other forums and websites so that I may improve on my writing skills. My worst fears is to make this story into a ramble with absolutely no meaningful plot. Thanks for the compliments guys!

Beetlebomb

[Hunter_S_Creek]

Originally Posted by Beetlebomb

Part 4 won't be coming out for a while I'm afraid. I'm taking into account all the comments, suggestions, and flames i've gotten from several other forums and websites so that I may improve on my writing skills. My worst fears is to make this story into a ramble with absolutely no meaningful plot. Thanks for the compliments guys!

Beetlebomb

I am very sorry that you've decided to put your cool story on hold. As I've mentioned in other forums, I like it very much.

If I may be so bold as to offer an observation and a comment --
Writers who are not being paid should write for themselves and not for the readers. It is the reader who benefits when a writer generously shares their work, not the writer.
You will never make everyone happy. There are far too many varied tastes on many of these Forums to please everyone.
Any Microcephalic Mouthbreather can criticize. It takes much more cerebration and skill to write constructive criticism.
Consider the source. If someone who has never contributed a story of their own is critical, then who cares what they say.
Many who make negative comments do so because they are basically bullies. And, anonymous, on-line criticism is the only power that they have in their lives. They are also usually the same folks who whine and wonder why there are not more free stories or artwork available to them.
If someone is not pleased with your work, that is their problem, not yours. At the most; offer them their money back. :-)

Tschuss!
Hunter

[Mattariel]

Oh, believe me, Hunter, I would contribute stories if I could, but I long since lost my writing muse a few years ago (about the same time I broke up with someone, to be honest).

I may not have posted any of my stories on here, but I did used to write a lot back in the day, and I do occasionally write stuff now, but considering the material, I'm actually embarrassed to post it in case it's considered too....'personalised' in regards to the content.

[Beetlebomb]

It's not so much as putting it on hold, but coming out with a solid cotinuation. As much as i'd like to satify everyones needs with this story I do understand that that is not possible. I am writing Part 4 now, but i'll be more in-depth with it then the last 3 parts, that's all


Beetlebomb

[MSGS]

New stories like these are welcome and seemingly more rarer than ever. Good work.

[Beetlebomb]

Originally Posted by MSGS

New stories like these are welcome and seemingly more rarer than ever. Good work.

My thoughts have changed since first posting. I know now that there are many people out there almost starving for new content as this.

I'm taking Hunter S. Creeks suggestion though. I'm writing because I feel I want to share something to the community because I have no skills at drawing nor movie-making. So this is the closest that I can get.

For those of you that are wondering Part 4 will be much longer (not like a chapter) and is currently Halfway done.

Have a nice evening,

Beetlebomb