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#25 |
Smutty Lady
Join Date: Apr 2008
Posts: 622
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Re: The Office (Version 2)
Now he's onto sketches 21 & 22! Some good action in those last chapters
![]() ![]() I'm going to skip Lulu and try Amazon first. If Amazon throws a fit about it, I'll look at alternates. Here's another small teaser from early on... |
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#26 |
Process Fan
Join Date: Oct 2006
Posts: 39
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Re: The Office (Version 2)
Excellent work!
I like how the characters are adjusting to their changes, but I'm guessing we'll finally see how Sarah became infected, right? |
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#27 |
Smutty Lady
Join Date: Apr 2008
Posts: 622
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Re: The Office (Version 2)
There's talk about that later with [REDACTED] to a degree. There's even another character added later that [REDACTED EVEN MORE]. There is a lot of sex and transformation in the story but I tried to put some good humor and an actual plot as well.
What I avoided was making a story that drags on and takes itself too seriously. You won't find sentences like, "She gazed longingly at him, her heart beating faster and faster. She wanted him to hold her in his strong, powerful arms and rescue her from the tedium of her daily existence. Her soul cried out for release and only he could give it to her..." Or any of that bullshit. Heh. The only beatings are where [REDACTED] does [WHOA] to [SOMEBODY]. Also, Sarah doesn't need help from anyone ![]() I've left some openings for another story after this if it does well and some things are kept slightly mysterious so we'll see! |
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#28 |
le batard noir
Join Date: Mar 2006
Location: Silence
Posts: 15
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Re: The Office (Version 2)
So when are you going to stop pitching the sale and just put it up?
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#29 |
Smutty Lady
Join Date: Apr 2008
Posts: 622
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Re: The Office (Version 2)
It should be done and ready to go at the end of next week or the beginning of the following. I'm touching up a few pieces while the illustrator finishes up.
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