Death knight to fertility knight

[Lurkergg]

I wanted to get some input on what people think of this comic concept I have been working on. I have my "before and after concepts" finished.

The story idea is about a troll death knight transforming from an avatar of death to one of life, a Fertility knight.

Waht I am aiming for is not so much "bimbofication" as it is "milfication". No change in intelligence but increased fertility, some other child bearing abilities and the ability to effect others fertility.

Whatever you may think of the story idea, I hope you like the picture

[Lurking Guy]

Two qualms.

One, I think you may want to simplify your designs. Like, a lot. Both because you'll be spending time on those little details you could spend putting out more material and because, well, it just does not look good. If you tone it down it could look okay, but right now the "fertile" one looks even more horrifying than the troll.

Two, you have neither a story nor a "concept" here for us to evaluate. You just have "I want to start my comic with a troll and end it with a hot chick." You'll probably want to get more details than that hammered down before you start asking opinions and trying to make a commitment.

[Katt]

Originally Posted by Lurking Guy

Two qualms.

One, I think you may want to simplify your designs. Like, a lot. Both because you'll be spending time on those little details you could spend putting out more material and because, well, it just does not look good. If you tone it down it could look okay, but right now the "fertile" one looks even more horrifying than the troll.

Two, you have neither a story nor a "concept" here for us to evaluate. You just have "I want to start my comic with a troll and end it with a hot chick." You'll probably want to get more details than that hammered down before you start asking opinions and trying to make a commitment.

I can agree on the first point but thats a matter of the artist's opinion and 'skill'. Maybe s/he just reflexively adds these details and it doesn't take them that long.

But the second qualm I don't agree with. The artist started their story and concept. "Deathknight becoming Fertility Knight who then affects others." So I assume that means she'll be going around making women preggers, BE , or fall in love with a dude with magic, etc etc.

Anyways, bonus points for using one of the 'ugly' races of the game I say!

[Calhoun]

For another conflicting opinion, I disagree with Lurking Guy.

I love that kinda stuff. Visual clutter is my bread and butter. But that's just me. It's true, of course, that for a lot of people more porn > more detailed porn as well. Nobody likes waiting for updates. And it does depend on if you think you can work at a decent pace with it.

I like the basic idea (Milfification). Bimbofication/Mind Control aren't really my thing, and the ideas of a process where it's enjoyed(?) or at least understood are appealing.

Going from a Death Knight to a Fertility Knight is kind of a leap, but that's for the story to tackle.

Trolls are also awesome.

[Katt]

Originally Posted by Calhoun

Going from a Death Knight to a Fertility Knight is kind of a leap, but that's for the story to tackle.

Trolls are also awesome.

Well she's probably repenting/making up for all the deaths she caused :P

I'm assuming its going to be a curse or somesuch from a dying priest/druid.

[Lurkergg]

Actually the story is about how she attacks the lone guardian (blood elf) of the ruby dragon shrine. (after the scourge war so they go back to there one guard policy, its not meant to make sense :P )

She is there looking for some fabled power. She eats some fruit at the shrine the transformation begins. (hence the fruit designs in the milfed version)

She enjoys her new form and it is willing. She takes this as a second chance to make things right but not to the world or herself but someone else I will not name at this time. The guardian and the death knights monstrous undead minion also go through transformations of their own caused by the shrine.

Specifics I dont want to spoil just yet.

To clarify the powers, she will have an advanced womb that she can take in several different donor's seed in and still bear each donors child. Even produce offspring that is a child of the two donors. So if a human and an orc "donate" she can bear a half-human half-orc child.

Don't know if I should give her the ability to have "speed pregnancies" (all done in 3 weeks instead of 9 months). Feels like she would not want to rush such a process. What do you guys think?

And thank you for the comments. I am glad there are troll fans out there

[Vengeance1701]

I'm glad you're used to dealing with internet snark. Some artists around here might have come in guns blazing at the critics.

[Lurkergg]

Thank you

Cant really blame them too much for providing what I asked. Feedback on my concept and the art. I like the feedback this thread has already provided and hope to post more stuff when it is appropriate. I already a full rough story outline and several rough pages but do not want to reveal everything at once.

Also it can all change at this stage.

But most of all, I am glad that there are people hungry for some hot wow Trolls

[Katt]

So what other processes will this contain? It sounds like there'll be more BE, Un-undeadification(?) and maybe even TG?

[Lurkergg]

For know I have been assuming that most deathknights that freed themselves of the lichking are not totally undead but very close. So it is not total "undeadification". More like rejuvenation in her case.

The other process I planed for her was her womb's changes. It going from a lifeless womb a deathknights might be to a super fertility goddess's womb.

Was not planning on any TG in this project.

But since you bring up "undeadification" this was not going to be a power I show in this comic, but I thought it would be cool if she could take the souls of defeated undead and fore them back into the cycle of life through her.

Goes to kill lich, comes back bearing child. :P

[Laughingman]

I find it pretty interesting as a story. It's simple, lends itself to lots of ideas, and the art is fantastic! I too am a fan of the "not so cluttered" but that's mostly because of reading lots of Manga where there's liquids spraying everywhere and tons of lines and you kind of get lost in it all. I think your art will be fine though, you just might get tired after doing all of that, lol. I wouldn't mind seeing her going around and making women more busty and other things. Neat concept!

[Katt]

Well like said, sounds good to me and looking forward to it. Lets hope to see some Dranei boobies!