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Unread 10-04-2012   #37
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Nice stuff!
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Unread 12-05-2012   #38
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Re: New artist, looking for critique

New holiday sketch. Girl turning into a candy cane slug.

Can't ink or color it right now, computer died(2nd this year)

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Unread 12-06-2012   #39
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Yay!
I like all your sluggy stuff.
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I like it all. Your re-starting well. Keep it up.
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Unread 12-06-2012   #41
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Great drawings.
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Can I suggest you to try to use some live models and to buy a good anatomy book. It'll help a lot! ;-)
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Can I suggest you to try to use some live models and to buy a good anatomy book. It'll help a lot! ;-)
Are you talking about my old work, or my newest uploads?

I'm always working on anatomy, either from books or using sites like posemaniac.com

Also, thanks all for the praise, I appreciate it!
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Unread 12-16-2012   #44
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Re: New artist, looking for critique

D-d-d-double post!

Heres the result of my first ever livestream session.
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And a magnificent debut it was. Keep on rockin', man.
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Re: New artist, looking for critique

Her arms look like they should be about 20% longer. They also don't look like they're supporting her weight.

Something weird's also going on with her rib cage considering the position of her neck. That or the fabric of her shirt is moving in a strange direction.
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Re: New artist, looking for critique

I agree that the rib cage bothers me a bit, but the breasts are the thing that stand out the most, in that position they would not be perkily in front of her. They almost appear to be attached at her neck, rather than at the sternum.
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Her arms look like they should be about 20% longer. They also don't look like they're supporting her weight.

Something weird's also going on with her rib cage considering the position of her neck. That or the fabric of her shirt is moving in a strange direction.
There is implied multi-boob in the pic, but the arm obscures most of it. And yeah, I agree I flubbed up on the back arm. I will try not to make that mistake again. Thanks =)
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