Yard Work (Part Three complete 8/1/13)

[jeffr_2bya]

I really like see this turn into a age regression/progression comic. Perhaps you can have two different endings? One with ar/ap and other one on shrinking/growth.

Double your sales with little cost since most the artwork will done.

[Dreamtales]

Originally Posted by marthlord54545

Hey Dreamtales, I was wondering when the next part of Puberty Fairies will be out?

That should be ready in early September. Thanks for asking!

[marthlord54545]

Originally Posted by Dreamtales

That should be ready in early September. Thanks for asking!

Thanks and no Problem

[manmountainmarko]

If you reboot the series as AR/AP like you had mentioned, I will buy five copies!

[vended]

I second this.

[marthlord54545]

Originally Posted by manmountainmarko

If you reboot the series as AR/AP like you had mentioned, I will buy five copies!

I like that idea, It would interesting if the story was this as well

[bubbleman]

Originally Posted by jeffr_2bya

I really like see this turn into a age regression/progression comic. Perhaps you can have two different endings? One with ar/ap and other one on shrinking/growth.

Double your sales with little cost since most the artwork will done.

Seconded! But, failing that...

Originally Posted by marthlord54545

I like that idea, It would interesting if the story was this as well

Fourthed!



Basically, I liked parts 1&2 a lot. Three was okay. If four & five turn out like you've described, I won't be buying them. Not as some kind of protest or anything, but because I've got zero interest in it.

I suspect that fans of either genre are going to feel the same way, because those who like AR/AP won't be buying Parts 4 & 5, and those who like the other stuff haven't even read Parts 1-3, you know?

[Janus Steel]

Originally Posted by bubbleman

I suspect that fans of either genre are going to feel the same way, because those who like AR/AP won't be buying Parts 4 & 5, and those who like the other stuff haven't even read Parts 1-3, you know?

I'm right there in that boat. I dislike GTS anything, so I rarely buy it. And it's like I said with Beach Blanket Cuties when Mandy was turned into a doll sized kid. There's no logical reason, based on the stories mechanics, that an AR device would suddenly cause you to shrink to tiny size. It should continue to regress.

Now that said I'm sure D.T. is writing this for himself and then just allowing us to buy to pay for his habit, admit it DT. :P, So we as fans have to take it with a grain of salt that the creator likes this and that's what he chooses to include in the story.

That said I'd be perfectly happy if there was no GTS of any sort in yard work or puberty fairies, but I suspect that's not what's going to happen.

[Dreamtales]

Originally Posted by bubbleman

Basically, I liked parts 1&2 a lot. Three was okay. If four & five turn out like you've described, I won't be buying them. Not as some kind of protest or anything, but because I've got zero interest in it.

I suspect that fans of either genre are going to feel the same way, because those who like AR/AP won't be buying Parts 4 & 5, and those who like the other stuff haven't even read Parts 1-3, you know?

Thanks very much for the votes of support for an AR/AP reboot! I'm excited about doing it, but I do have to get my investment back on the current series, so any support is helpful.

As for the current series, there is some age play / teasing in Part 4 but honestly Part 5 is pretty much a GTS / SM comic. I don't want people buying it and getting disappointed. Hopefully enough buyers will hang in there to make the AR reboot possible.

[godleydemon]

Originally Posted by Dreamtales

Thanks very much for the votes of support for an AR/AP reboot! I'm excited about doing it, but I do have to get my investment back on the current series, so any support is helpful.

As for the current series, there is some age play / teasing in Part 4 but honestly Part 5 is pretty much a GTS / SM comic. I don't want people buying it and getting disappointed. Hopefully enough buyers will hang in there to make the AR reboot possible.

Well theirs a slight problem with that, your mixing genres. Most and I say most, because there are some. Most AR/AP lovers out there have no interest in GTS or SM. Those that do like GTS and SM will probably have no idea what the comic is about. Some might go back and purchase the series but then be completely disappointed thus lowering your sales exponentially because of disappointment. I understand your trying to fit a wide audience, but if you want to do a GTS/SM comic, then do a spin off of some sort. Because the weird green label on page 28 in the 3rd book had me thinking she might have the weed grower and we might see some reverse revenge happen. Especially since she was wearing a swim suit which was a horridly missed opportunity. Then of course the label color disappears entirely on page 30. Basically through the entire book I seen labels disappear, reappear different colors and be all together inconsistent. Especially since the story focuses on them.

Though that being said, I love a lot of the artwork but issue the same complaints as everyone else. If he's getting younger, then why doesn't he look younger. He just looks shorter. But she's diffidently getting older, but when moms gets splashed with the same stuff she gets sexier? Just.. most of this story could be really really awesome. If just someone would have went through it better.

and as a side note, the outline of her glasses got forgotten about on page 36.

[Dreamtales]

Originally Posted by godleydemon

Well theirs a slight problem with that, your mixing genres.
and as a side note, the outline of her glasses got forgotten about on page 36.

Thanks very much for the thoughts, and for pointing out the discrepancies. I see your point about appealing to the biggest audience, but actually Janus Steel got it right when he said I'm "writing this for (my)self and then just allowing us to buy to pay for his habit."

Seriously though, I've found that it just doesn't go as well if I approach a comic from the POV of "what might this genre of readers want?" Basically I have to be personally excited about a comic in order to get the motivation to do the best job I can with it.

[shadowfox586]

Loved parts one and two. Part three was okay, but the whole thing felt like one big tease. There was less process shown I felt as well. The art quality is still pretty perfect though, gotta give credit where its due. One of the best looking process comics Ive ever seen.

Im sad to hear that most of what made the first two so great wont be in parts 4 or 5. Im less interested in GTS/SM than AR/AP, but interested enough I might give it a shot. If its less of a tease than this one, Ill probably still buy it.

Still, overall enjoyed everything so far. Not sure I can recommend the third, and I will be reading reviews on the fourth before buying, but still looking forward to the release of the fourth.