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N647 comic Wish Upon a Star
Hello, night here, so long since I posted aroudn here XD
Well I wanted to share that I uploaded my first comic today on lulu, is 10 pages long in high resolution, here is the cover and a sneack peack of if ![]() yes it includes breast expansion :P get it on lulu for 2.90 usd http://www.lulu.com/shop/night-n647/...-22250110.html also a link to my patreon: https://www.patreon.com/N647 Last edited by night; 07-02-2015 at 04:55 PM. |
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The Defiant Soul
Join Date: Oct 2005
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Re: N647 comic Wish Upon a Star
Very nicely done
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Just a wanderer
Join Date: Oct 2005
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Re: N647 comic Wish Upon a Star
That was pretty good.
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Re: N647 comic Wish Upon a Star
thanks is a big step forward for me doing this ^^
and please I would love to hear your critics on it |
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Re: N647 comic Wish Upon a Star
That was a well-drawn Hourglass Expansion comic. I liked it, the illustration of the process was decent, and it was worth my money
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Re: N647 comic Wish Upon a Star
I did really like the comic ^^ the only minor critique I could say is that given the girl gains a much more beautiful face in the transformation, I think the process should be done with her eyes opened.
anyways, I did really like the process and the "story" XD |
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Re: N647 comic Wish Upon a Star
heh, I'll get it through patreon next month ^^
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Re: N647 comic Wish Upon a Star
thanks for the critique, and yes if this comic does well enough I will be able to focus on doing more of these comics in this format ^^ so you may see more of it in the future
![]() and hey it has at least some romance, kind of... ^^; |
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Re: N647 comic Wish Upon a Star
Oops. Where are my manners. "Ahem." If I may..
In terms of romance, it was pleasant and sweet. The fact that Alice gains so much confidence through her transformation and overcome her sadness was just delightful to read. ![]()
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Re: N647 comic Wish Upon a Star
lol is cool you donīt have to worry, but thank s I m happy people can apreciate that part too ^^
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Leecher
Join Date: Sep 2014
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Re: N647 comic Wish Upon a Star
I've seen a lot of your work vanish into thin air over the years, and had been seriously afraid you had left this sort of idea behind. Super glad to see you didn't, and super glad I got this comic.
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Join Date: Mar 2008
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Re: N647 comic Wish Upon a Star
Love the concept, but I agree her eyes being closed during the change is both understandable due to the suddenness of it all, but at the same time would try to keep them open to see what was going on and look at the one she loves as her eyes changed from fearful to ones of love/lust. otherwise I wonder what "side effects" this will have on her when she "powers" down?
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