Cute Little Comic

cattyn and snowglare. thanks for the attempt at critiquing my "doodle"..

how ever you should be aware its just a rough sketch, you cant expect it to be refined and masterful .
i originally started out with just the "big-hipped" catgirl then added the giant chest and the therapeutic items she's using...

the sketch was half-ass , so there was no real effort put forth on details , the comic how ever came out of just a sudden urge since felt there was allot of empty space around her. so there was really no real thought to it or its lay out, but if you used your eyes a bit more you might of noticed the page starts from the left side, down then right and down .

i figured there are people smart enough to see that without me having to point that out on how to go about reading it . as for the text or the format all together there was no preplanned work or script, i just wrote how the panels spoke to me.
sure some will like some will hate, cant prevent that its the way things work plus you really cant expect me to write sophisticated hand writing on some sketch can you?

this comic was done two months ago as it said in the description,i was also unsure of posting to back then since there was really no effort at all put into this it was just a personal doodle-
(that was probably poorly made to other viewing eye's) -to humor myself then i thought hey, i guess i could post this after finding it in some sketch pile

if you can make it out even just barely of what going on in it, thats good enough.
so please try to understand before you go off a rocker that this is a sketch a doodle beside it only took like 20 or so minutes to do anyways .

i'll only refine or improve on certain stuff, depending on its attention or feed back it'll receive, if others want to see more of it or possibly in better condition then fine but since its not doing anything of the sort.
so right now it seriously doesn't matter on how it looks since after all again it's just a sketch. :P

anyways cattyn I've seen your style before had a good cartoon-like feel to it, i saw how organized you were with the layouts and all it was really enjoyable had a good time looking at your art over the years, but seriously...
you were an artist of your time sure you might be disappointed with how art is forming in the new age , or your just taking your stress out on the nearest thing to you :P it cant be helped .

what ever the case get better soon dude.


though a word of advise if your ever going to critique someone calm down first and and don't complain, you make it look more like a "jealous yissy-fit rant" more then anything, and i know you meant well..

so next time if i ever plan to make some sort of comic again, its up to me on the amount of attention to details I'll put in it. plus i really don't like bothering to add much details to a rough sketch its a waste of time if im just going to digitally ink it or use the light lamp on it for traditional inking.

if its a pencil styled art then that would be a whole other story XD

but as a novice artist in training that i currently am. i must thank you for you "attempt for words of improvement" i will keep them in mind next time so thanks.
(and no i wasn't trying to mock you there i was being serious)