Comic Brainstorming

[Grumpy]

I have an idea that could work but that depends on how you think of violence in comics and how much you want to work with it. So far it feels like there's mostly story and more positive elements for the reader. Ain't it better to add some negative things to wager so it doesn't get boring in the long run? For example (not the best way to compare), I'll give you a plate with some really hot and tasty mexican food. You'll eat and eat but after a while it starts to feel bad because you don't have something to drink. Add a coke and it feels as deliciously as from the start. In this case the mexican food is your comic as it is now and the coke is what wagers it up.

So what's the coke you might ask? So far you guys have been talking about this Biokinesis and all the positive possibilities around it. What do you think of her powers getting out of hand sometimes. A really overused but still working way of doing it would be when she's in a life-threatning situation or when she's overly confused.

So in short; Subi might be cornered by an enemy or the like and have no way to get out. By all the emotional flow and such the power gets out of hand starting to expand, mutilate, drain and transform the body of the enemy in horrible ways. Some might be drained to just skin and bone, some might implode or even explode etc. etc. etc. It's a really gross way of adding that 'coke' but the coke is still needed sometimes.

Well, that's my ideas so far. I've been too lazy to read this thread through before but now I did. Hope the tip might come in handy.

Over and out~

P.S.
If you would consider adding that coke, please add it a bit away from the more 'arousing' parts. It's not fun having something 'good' one page and the next page have material that make you puke. ;P