Mega Mocha

[bacattack]

I like where this is going, your choice of perspective is good and page 4 is cute, if, yes, slightly creepy XD. I like the fact your process is somewhat innocent in comparison to other artists, it's nice to have straight-ahead growth instead of her masturbating and such at the same time (which I get tired of at times).

I like the sense of humor you injected into this as well, it makes it stand out.