"The Great Emulation" BeStoryClub Comic- author seeking feedback

[clovis]

The third and final part of my latest comic is now up over at the bestoryclub and I was wondering if anyone had read it and would care to comment. As I'd like to write another one for either the BESC or Lorekeep's upcoming Giantessclub I'm particularly interested to know: were there any parts that didn't make sense, were there any issues with how it read as a comic in general, and how does the storytelling compare with the BESC library or comics in general. As always I tried to come up with something a bit different, and I think this achieved that. There are several types of process covered, but I understand someone will always feel left out. The art came out good- there's always minor quibbles- but they really captured the spirit of what I was going for. Three chapters is about the equivalent of a month's membership over there, so did you feel you got your money's worth? If another story by Clovis appeared on the new releases list would you be excited or annoyed?

Thanks for your time-
Clovis

Oh, and while I'm sending you over to the site, I strongly recommend checking out "A Pirate's Life" by SaburoX- it's not yet finished, but I have to say it's my favorite so far.