My First Story: The Moon Coin

Rei-Lin · 11-20-2006

There's a couple more parts, and both are a little rough I think, I haven't had enough time to fine tune them yet, but I figured I'd put them up anyway. I know there's not a lot of transformation in the last two parts, but I thought it'd be a good idea to add a little more to the story and some history to the ring, for a sense of just what it could do. Tell me again, what you think, and of course throw suggestions out there as to what things she could turn into, or if I should focus on something else for the transformations, as I tend to focus a lot on the details of transformation since it's rare to get a lot of detail in stories. Thanks for the comments so far, I appreciate it.

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11-20-2006	#11
Rei-Lin Process Master Join Date: Oct 2005 Posts: 614	There's a couple more parts, and both are a little rough I think, I haven't had enough time to fine tune them yet, but I figured I'd put them up anyway. I know there's not a lot of transformation in the last two parts, but I thought it'd be a good idea to add a little more to the story and some history to the ring, for a sense of just what it could do. Tell me again, what you think, and of course throw suggestions out there as to what things she could turn into, or if I should focus on something else for the transformations, as I tend to focus a lot on the details of transformation since it's rare to get a lot of detail in stories. Thanks for the comments so far, I appreciate it.