Hand Maid May comic redux

[Sucht17]

So, here goes try number 2.

First try here.

For now, the picture here is sort of a placeholder. It's a "prototype" of sorts.

I'm just sketching out the first page layout.

Also, I'm open to ideas. If I like 'em I'll probably use them.

Edit ver. 2.8 : Page 28 up

Second post collection here.